FIC: Hatsukoi, SanaYuki, NC17 (2/2)

May 21, 2008 17:20

Title: Hatsukoi (2/2)
Author: Ociwen
Rating: NC17
Wordcount: 18 965
Disclaimer: Konomi owns all, except the references to Tian and Flying High.
Summary: First love, Sanada and Yukimura-style.
Author's Notes: Many thanks to koneko_meow for the betaing. Written for Sanada's birthday, 2008. Happy Birthday Sanada Genichirou! &hearts ( Read more... )

sanayuki, tenipuri

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anonymous May 21 2008, 23:20:35 UTC
Two great fics from you in two days, you are spoiling us!

I loved this fic so much, I can barely be coherent about it. I loved Sanada's mini-promises with each National Tournament, the first meeting with Akaya, Renji who masturbates too much, the text messages during the China trip, Urayama Shiita!!!! He is so Sanada and Yukimura's love child, it is ridiculous. This was an amazing job you did showing us all the sweet and sour sides to a relationship between Yukimura and Sanada and it was beautiful - &hearts for you for given us this wonderful story!

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reposoir May 25 2008, 16:44:48 UTC
As ever, anonymous-san, thank you so much for the kind words! I'm so glad you enjoyed both the sweet and sour sides to this fic (which is a perfect way to describe it as well! Thank you for that also!)

(I promise not to spam you guys too much over the summer. I'll be away, so that's why I'm posting a lot more at the present. That, and there are a lot of important events in late May/early June ;)

&hearts

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tokyolights May 22 2008, 00:04:23 UTC
God, it's already 2am so don't wonder if my English might sound as crappy as a elementary school kid's.

This was brilliant, Allison. Really. Probably one of my favourite fics of yours <3 I liked the way you were not only talking about Sanada's and Yukimura's blooming relationship, but also about the whole tennis team and Sanada's feelings during Yukimura's time in hospital. Thank you ♥

And now I'll slither off and go to bed >)

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reposoir May 25 2008, 16:45:53 UTC
*wibbles*

Thank YOU so much, Leonie! You're making me blush with your comment, you know. I'm so glad you liked this fic! ^-^

*tucks you into bed with a Kouhei plushie*

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reposoir May 25 2008, 16:46:42 UTC
Aw, thank you! Sweet, but not annoyingly so is always good. I'm glad it was nothing too saccharine, because that just wouldn't be right with Sanada and Yukimura :)

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iceshade May 22 2008, 00:47:04 UTC
omg I am absolutely DEAD now, but I will comment either later (if I have time) or tomorrow morning about how much I love this... <3
but before I forget: I LOVE your Niou... can I have him please? ^^;

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iceshade May 25 2008, 03:50:01 UTC
Renji constantly masturbates.
so not what I think of for yanagi XD... because we all know what niou and yagyuu were doing the night they shared a room... ^^; poor sanada...
and the platinum pair hints and your angry yukimura, and just everything... ::wibbles:: WAAH! your sex is hot and funny at the same time, as always, and I love it...
and what does hatsukoi mean? (if anything)

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reposoir May 25 2008, 16:48:33 UTC
Hatsukoi means "puppy love", or "first love", that sort of thing. It's the title of one of the songs from the Tenimyu Best of Actors CD with Sanada and Yukimura.

Yanagi has aspects to his personality that we don't expect. Like his penchant for disco music... ;)

Thank you so very much!

(Yagyuu and Niou were probably playing darts. And drinking Chinese beer that night ;)

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iceshade May 25 2008, 21:56:14 UTC
awww...
::dies laughing at mental image of yanagi dancing to disco music:: XD ahh, at this point they were still the "innocent" platinum pair... ::is shot::

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volley May 22 2008, 02:53:46 UTC
Words cannot properly express how much love I have for this fic.
I haven't been feeling much PoT love lately, but after reading this, I feel like my love for the series has been rekindled.
I love way too many parts of this fic for me to mention all of them, but reading this reminded me of how your description is simply to die for. I love your awkward, puberty-ridden Sanada. I also really, really love how you included *~Letter from Sanada~* in there. He's such a lovable dork. And the bit on Renji fapping away at night while Sanada tries to sleep made me laugh out loud.
Much love to you! And to Sanada, a belated happy birthday! To compensate for my usual lack of coherence, have some hearts: ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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reposoir May 28 2008, 02:06:01 UTC
Aw, thank you! If your love has been rekindled with this fic, then I am truly happy! &hearts

(Sanada's letters could not be excluded. They were far, far too amusing not to include ;)

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