[Fic] Dare you to move : four

[rennie_88]

Title: Dare you to Move
Pairing: Jaemin
Length: Chapter 4/10
Genre: high school AU,angst,drama
Warnings: bullying. bullying
(Plz don't hate/bash me, there has to be excessive bullying for there to be a bodyguard. :P)
Story request by rikuma, i hope you like it! <3

Summary : Changmin is the loser who everyone bullies at school. He's also the only son of the city

Comments

[dreaming_col]

Jaejoongie~!!! Seriously, from his very first introduction, all I can see is his character from 'Dating on Earth'. And he was perfect in that, so I have high hopes. XD

So Min isn't going to know that Jae's technically his bodyguard? I'm assuming Chunnie called him in, unless Min's parents are just keeping up some kind of pretense of not knowing. Which wouldn't make any sense, so I'm going with my first guess. Ugh, I can't wait to see where this all goes~~!!! (And I am SOOOO flippin' happy you're getting it updated faster than your other fics, even if the chaps are shorter. ^_^)

[rennie_88]

i knnoooooooooow~ cuz dating on earth he was too freaking bad boy hot cool and *gushes in puddle of melting fangirl* i might need to rewatch it haha

yeah its supposed to be a secret ~ cuz i guess school only admits students and it's supposed to be fancy prestigious place so they dont need stuff like that thinking their school perfect and safe etc? its good enough reason right? XD i dno how this works in real life lol yap there's gona be something with jaechun sorta but i'm not sure yet ~ if i can get some time after all the inlaw stuff this weekend i can finish chp 5 and post HOPEfully TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!

[dreaming_col]

Ugh, for serious~~~ I almost rewatched it on Thursday night, but by the time I got home from Apgujeong, it was bedtime. XD

Ahh, yeah, I guess that makes sense. I mean, it makes sense that the school shouldn't know. But why not Min? (Yes, I'm gonna push you for answers. Hopefully you would do the same for me... ^_~) Ahh, good luck with all that. I'm excited to see what happens in Ch5. ^^

[rennie_88]

yeah exactly TT no time sighhh just got back from dad's and mom is coming again in an hour even tho she came yesterday too :O i need my fangirling timee *cry*

hmmm originally the outline i first made he did know about it, but then i thought its better for drama if he doenst :P like so then the moment he finds out who joongie really is and stuff its supposed to be misunderstandings and dramatic and more interesting?..........................= =....rethinking now and its only cuz of one scene i planned later that it shud be a secret at all....HMmmmmm crap ur making me ovverthink LOL :S

[rikuma]

omo uri Jaejoongie!!!!!
so bad-assed...keke...:))
and why Jaemin??kuku...
well i guess i just need to wait for them to develop further and to keep in mind that uri Joongie is trying to be subtle...keke...:))

[rennie_88]

do u like badass joongie yes???????? T^T !! dont worry next chapter is actually jaemin meeting for reals :) but yes, he has to play his part and pretend to be a normal student keke i hope you're liking it so far <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 shud get next chapter up on sunday i think ~

[rikuma]

haha...:))
well he should be an actor then...haha..."))
owh and dhbsvchjdfvfvjbjdfv jf....kyaaaah!!!!!!
"CAN"T WAIT PLEASE FEED MY CHANGMIN HUNGER!!!!!"

[rennie_88]

actor...hmmmmm hehe thats so complicated! :X
YES MA'AM!!! :) I"m working on it go go goooo keke

[rennie_88]

hehe there will be lots of bully butt kicking from chun and joongie :P

hmmm yeah its true..min's extra proud and stupid cuz he looks up to chun and doenst want to disappoint him. but that can wear off once he gets bedazzled by joongie instead :P

thank you <3 <3 makes me happy to hear that :)

[crimson_miharu]

FInally Jae has arrived. I was actually hoping he would become Jisung's bully. Let him know how it feels to be tormented. It amazes me how easily Jisung backed down when met with someone who he thought could best him and the thing that is even more amazing is that JAe didn't really have to do a damn thing for him to have that impression. Being confident and not giving an actual flying fuck speaks volumes to people like Jisung..can't bully someone who doesn't give a shit about the air you breathe...

I can't believe he was gonna rape Min :O...this goes FAR beyond bullying and when I read the part about this being nothing new to him my mouth dropped. I hope Jae teaches Min how to stand up for himself because while Jae can interfere and beat them up, people like Jisung will only keep coming back to hurt him more...

[rennie_88]

:) jae's too cool to be a bully, but he'll have fun messing with jisung who's like an annoying little ant or something xD~ heh heh exactly tho. cuz ppl like jisung are actually wimps and just go for ppl weaker than them and are MEAN so ppl get scared of them..

dont worrie, i wont make anything that bad actually happen ~ -0-;;
there will definitely be some jaejoong 'training' min :P cuz ur so right and he cant be there 24/7 to protect his precious hehehehe

thank u for commenting <3 <3 updating very soon ~

[einji]

i really like the plot ^~^♥
but I gotta know, is Jae gonna be, well, top? or is it the type of story where it's not specified? Cuz I prefer min acting like a top, but it's obviously not happening, at least not yet o.O
please let me know cuz that's confusing to me XD

and thank you for writing ^^ looking forward to the next s2

[rennie_88]

wow thank you!!!!!!!! :) i'm really glad to hear it cuz trying to make the plot interesting ~
well min's not quite top material yet :P tho this story will probably be jaemin rather than minjae cuz of the character profiles etc. but i hope you still like it even if he's not top huu TT

thank you for reading and commentinggg!! <3 <3 more coming soon~ :)