[Fic] Dare you to move : four

[rennie_88]

Title: Dare you to Move
Pairing: Jaemin
Length: Chapter 4/10
Genre: high school AU,angst,drama
Warnings: bullying. bullying
(Plz don't hate/bash me, there has to be excessive bullying for there to be a bodyguard. :P)
Story request by rikuma, i hope you like it! <3

Summary : Changmin is the loser who everyone bullies at school. He's also the only son of the city

Comments

[dreaming_col]

Jaejoongie~!!! Seriously, from his very first introduction, all I can see is his character from 'Dating on Earth'. And he was perfect in that, so I have high hopes. XD

So Min isn't going to know that Jae's technically his bodyguard? I'm assuming Chunnie called him in, unless Min's parents are just keeping up some kind of pretense of not knowing. Which wouldn't make any sense, so I'm going with my first guess. Ugh, I can't wait to see where this all goes~~!!! (And I am SOOOO flippin' happy you're getting it updated faster than your other fics, even if the chaps are shorter. ^_^)

[rennie_88]

i knnoooooooooow~ cuz dating on earth he was too freaking bad boy hot cool and *gushes in puddle of melting fangirl* i might need to rewatch it haha

yeah its supposed to be a secret ~ cuz i guess school only admits students and it's supposed to be fancy prestigious place so they dont need stuff like that thinking their school perfect and safe etc? its good enough reason right? XD i dno how this works in real life lol yap there's gona be something with jaechun sorta but i'm not sure yet ~ if i can get some time after all the inlaw stuff this weekend i can finish chp 5 and post HOPEfully TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!

[dreaming_col]

Ugh, for serious~~~ I almost rewatched it on Thursday night, but by the time I got home from Apgujeong, it was bedtime. XD

Ahh, yeah, I guess that makes sense. I mean, it makes sense that the school shouldn't know. But why not Min? (Yes, I'm gonna push you for answers. Hopefully you would do the same for me... ^_~) Ahh, good luck with all that. I'm excited to see what happens in Ch5. ^^

[rennie_88]

yeah exactly TT no time sighhh just got back from dad's and mom is coming again in an hour even tho she came yesterday too :O i need my fangirling timee *cry*

hmmm originally the outline i first made he did know about it, but then i thought its better for drama if he doenst :P like so then the moment he finds out who joongie really is and stuff its supposed to be misunderstandings and dramatic and more interesting?..........................= =....rethinking now and its only cuz of one scene i planned later that it shud be a secret at all....HMmmmmm crap ur making me ovverthink LOL :S

[dreaming_col]

We should arrange a full fangirling day soon. Coffee and fic talk, finish watching Su's con, watch Dating on Earth... ^_^

It does make for better drama if Min doesn't know, especially if he finds out the truth AFTER they fall for each other/get together. O_O But at the same time, you do need some kind of reason for WHY Min can't know. Just because it's something your readers will ask (or already have started asking, like me XD) themselves. *shrugs* Just a thought, dear. ^_^ ♥

[rennie_88]

omg we have yet to do a real 'fic day' type thing lol where we just go through all the things we are stuck on and just talking about them and asking questions finding holes etc. like writing brainstorm session? oohh sounds so funnn alksjfl XD lol aand the coffee is a must..and the videos too.. u need to hurry and move closer -0- lol

well true lol like you know, these are exactly the kinds of questions authors need tho :P cuz so easy to miss sthg or all u need is just someone to prompt the thinking sessions that fills in a plot hole etc lol XD
but how i wrote it out so far was simply that him remaining undercover secret identity was the ultimatum for allowing him into the school by the principal. so i guess now i gota think of the reason why min cant secretly kno and pretend not to? hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm @.@

[dreaming_col]

For serious~~~ That would be so cool! Maybe we can still have that day anyway, without the vids at least until I move closer. But if you're free next Sat, I'm going to the orientation at my new school to meet parents/students and finally sign my contract. Maybe we can meet up after that's over for a marathon fic session? (And some non-sicky noraebang when we're done? ^_~)

Definitely. I always love when commenters point out a hole or something that I hadn't noticed before. Always makes me think that much more about my plot, which is always fun. ^^
Ahhh, that actually makes sense. I was thinking Jae was gonna be there as a secret from the whole school, but if the principal knows and makes that a condition, that's a pretty good reason. Though I still wish Min could know, just so he would have someone to go to if things get that bad again... (Not that he would, stubborn bastard. -_-)

[rennie_88]

yeah we shud just have a strictly fic planning day cuz it wont happen unless we decidedly set time aside for it :P what time ur gona go there??? next weekend is umm 16th right? i need fic session woohooo and non-sicky is very tempting LOL

yes~ even so much as certain chapters might not have existed if someone didn't mention something or make an incorrect guess abotu the plot or sthg lol interactive writing? keke
well min might not have to go through all the trouble of laying down his pride and finding him when its bad ....just for the mere fact that joongie will stalk him like the plague heheheheh

[dreaming_col]

Exactly~~ If we decide to fangirl on the same day, we'll rush through fic stuff for the fangirliness instead, so choosing a day solely for fic planning is a better idea. XD And, yep, the 16th. Have to be at the school at 12:30, then my friend said it should be over by 2 or 3 at the latest. She'll ask for sure on Tuesday and let me know. ^^

Toooootally~! Honestly, all of 'Falling' wouldn't have existed at all without some of the comments on the 'Possession' bonus chaps. Crazy how one or two little comments can set you spinning in a direction you'd never intended...
Lol~!!! So Jae has the image of fierce and stand-offish, but in reality, he's gonna be all overprotective and clingy? I can deal with that. XDDDDD

[rennie_88]

okieee! awesome. <3 lets make it tentative plan for the 16th then cuz u dno for sure what time etc ~ its near apgujeong stn u said?

its an endless void of inspiration @_@!!
this is what my brain produces when jaemin are supposed to be together quickly without angst and prolonged emotional drama LOL

[dreaming_col]

Yay~!! ^__^ Yeah, near the station. It's out of exit 3 and then about a 5-10 minute walk from there, but I think if we just meet at exit 3 when I'm done, there's a Holly's right there. Then after an appropriate amount of ficcing, we can head to our normal spot around exit 5 for dinner and singing~~~ :D

It totally is! That's why I get so disappointed when I barely get any reviews... T___T
Lol!! I don't mind it~~ There's enough turmoil between them in your other fics. It's nice that this one will be much easier, at least in that aspect. ^^

[rennie_88]

omg i want it to be that day NOW lol just hoping theres nothing happening that day i dno about yet :S cuz i have to work the NEXT saturday.. 23rd? and i can just ask mother in law to come sunday for tutoring instead.. huuu

yeah *hugs* i'll try to leave more constructive comments but i usually cant stop just gushing or blabbing about useless things TT -0-!

huu yes. i dont care if its unrealistic or silly, jaemin doesnt need reasons to make them just. be. together. in love. *jaemin hearts*

[dreaming_col]

Ohmygosh, for serious~!! Only, y'know, 6 days to go... *sighs* (No, wait, it's technically Monday now, right? So 5 days. ^^) But, yes, hopefully nothing comes up. For you. Nothing ever comes up for me... XD

Ahhh, that's okay. You always leave me comments, so I'm happy. And I assume if you ever actually had questions or spotted an inconsistency, you'd let me know. ^_^

Sooo true~~~ *JaeMin hearts = the best hearts ♥*