fic: "Best Interest" [PG] 1/1

[renisanz]

TITLE: Best Interest
AUTHOR: renisanz
SUMMARY: Ronon and Jennifer resume sparring lessons after "The Lost Tribe."
CATEGORY: UST, a bit of angst
RATING: PG
WORDS: 898
BETAS: tardiscalling84 and nika_dixon
SPOILERS: hints of “Missing,” definitely “The Lost Tribe”
DISCLAIMER: I don't own 'em, but they're fun to play, not for profit.
NOTES: This is for journeyman07 , hoping she'll get

Comments

[sezjara]

Hey, an update. Not the one I was hoping for, but I like this, too.

Very nicely written. I have to say, after watching "The Lost Tribe" I was rather disappointed. It just didn't seem like Jen when she told him she was interested in someone else. And who's to say it won't turn around later this season.

Anyway, this is nicely written. This flows very nicely, and it makes sense, too. I like Jen throwing her weapon. I'd be frustrated, too.

I like to believe she will still continue her sparring lessons with him, and the way you've written this makes sense in that regard. She would want to continue, but he would probably hesitate. He's been hurt, even if he'll never admit it, even to himself. This makes it all seem okay.

She lied to him. To herself.

Ronon vowed to be there when she finally realized it.Yeah

[renisanz]

I have written another chapter to "Back Home," but I've only posted it on ff.net and not yet on LJ.

But thank you. I'm glad you like this. It was quite therapeutic to write.

Can I convince you to expand upon this, maybe show us how they end up together (cause my poor Ronon/Keller heart would love to see a happy ending to this unhappy turn of events on the show)?

I did consider continuing this from Jen's POV, but I don't know if I'll write it anytime soon. Like you mentioned, I have other stories needing a priority. ;)

[moonlightstorm]

Oooh, this was great. That ending was perfect, and I like your Ronon voice. :)

[renisanz]

Thank you so much. :) Ronon's an interesting character to write for.

[funkyinfishnet]

Nice work, made the Lost Tribe's ending much more easy to take. Hurray for fanfic to right wrongs. Thanks for sharing :)

[renisanz]

Thank you. Glad I could help mend a few shippy hearts with this.

[little_profiler]

Wow, just wow! That last scene. I seriously screamed at my computer for them to kiss each other! Of course, Ronon certainly couldn't since she'd just told him about her 'other love interest' but... I wanted her to realize the mistake right away and then take the lead and kiss him. Okay, that's just my being-in-a-girly-mood shipper-heart. :)

[renisanz]

Thank you. That's the reaction I was trying to get. :)

[magneticwave]

So perfectly wonderful after all of Teh Wangst from 'The Lost Tribe.' The imagery is wonderful. I love how you get into Ronan's head.

[renisanz]

Thank you. It was fun to write this side of Ronon. :)