fic: Parallax (G) 1/1

[renisanz]

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[kriadydragon]

Awwww. So cute !

:)

[renisanz]

Thanks. :)

[sezjara]

I like how this turned out!

Teyla with a camera...I can only imagine the possibilities...

Good job!

*grins*

[renisanz]

Thank you. :)

[azure_horizon]

:D

This was really great. I love the title; it's very well thought out :D

There's a peace to this story that just warms my heart. Well done :)

I giggled at the R/K bits - I'm not a shipper of them but... yeah lol.

[renisanz]

Thank you so much.

As for the R/K bits. . .I'd love to say that I wrote them with the specific intention of melting your angsty heart. . . but such is not the case. ;) LOL.

I do have fun writing them, though (obviously), and in this story in particular, I used them to set up a nice contrast to John and Teyla's relationship. It's really great to hear that you enjoyed it, though. :)

[blencathra]

Simply lovely Reni.

I read this mainly because of the R/K part (which I loved). You write J/T just as well as your R/K.

I particularly liked the scenes you portray between mother and child.

:)

[renisanz]

Thank you. It was hard not to let the R/K elements overwhelm the story. I purposely held back, though. :) There's a whole 'nother story about Jen's photo session with Ronon and what exactly they were doing in that hallway. LOL.

But yeah. . .Glad you liked it, especially the mother & child scenes. :)

[muccamukk]

This is very sweet. I like how it starts with Teyla just sort of playing with it, then widens into what it means to Jennifer and John, and her own understanding.

The baby is very cute.

[renisanz]

Thanks. :) I suppose the whole thing is about learning, in a way.