Comments | renisanz: fic: Parallax (G) 1/1

renisanz

fic: Parallax (G) 1/1

Jun 28, 2008 23:05

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character: john sheppard, pairing: ronon/keller, character: ronon dex, character: jennifer keller, fandom: sga, challenge: thingathon2008, fan: fic, pairing: john/teyla, character: teyla emmagan

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myeverlovinmind June 30 2008, 07:45:25 UTC

Excellent job Reni! Love it!

renisanz June 30 2008, 15:03:54 UTC

Thank you. :)

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renisanz June 30 2008, 19:04:14 UTC

Thanks. Others seems to like the opening scene as well. I guess I was trying to convey the art of photography with seeing light and shadow in a different way. Glad you liked it. :) And you're welcome.

2bluaeryn June 30 2008, 22:27:13 UTC

Nicely done!

renisanz July 1 2008, 03:51:18 UTC

Thank you! :)

ruby_caspar July 1 2008, 07:58:16 UTC

Very, very sweet. Well-written and unbelievably cute!

renisanz July 1 2008, 16:23:04 UTC

Awww. . . Thank you. :)

jeyla4ever July 7 2008, 21:53:34 UTC

This has such a warmth feeling to it and such a flow into this peaceful connection that is so John and Teyla.
I love the idea of Teyla memorizing a frozen time with a camera. It is a powerful thing. And to have them both capture the same image within each other...so John and Teyla. PRICELESS! Nicely done. Thank you!

renisanz July 7 2008, 22:06:50 UTC

Oh, you're very welcome! Glad you liked it. I suppose the first scene really set the tone of the story, and the fact that it's all from Teyla's POV lends well to serenity. Thank you. :)