[FIC] Frozen Wings

Dec 09, 2010 12:25

Title: Frozen Wings (4253 words) by ren
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Transformers - All Media Types, Transformers Generation One
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: Author Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
Relationships: Jazz/Prowl
Characters: Jazz, Prowl, Optimus Prime, Smokescreen
Additional Tags: Tragedy, The Fall of Praxus, Praxian Culture, ( Read more... )

character: jazz, rating: teen, character: ratchet, genre: hurt/comfort, status: complete, warnings: trigger, challenge, character: optimus prime, community: prowlxjazz, character: prowl, 'writing: fanfiction, type: challenge response, character: bluestreak, 'fandom: transformers, genre: tragedy, pairing: jazz/prowl, 2010, world: g1, group: autobots, relationship: slash

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__wilderness__ December 9 2010, 17:40:31 UTC
I think the ending is perfect. Prowl needs some love and affection after Fixer's nasty gesture.

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renegadewriter8 December 9 2010, 17:42:15 UTC
Wow you read fast XD Yey I'm glad you liked it though, wasn't so sure about the ending. =)

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draw_me_tender December 9 2010, 18:20:12 UTC
That is just stunning. It's strange how sometimes something beautiful can come out of suffering and grief

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renegadewriter8 December 9 2010, 20:26:50 UTC
hehe, something good always comes out of something bad, you just need to look hard to find it sometimes. Glad you liked it!

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thepheonixqueen December 9 2010, 19:01:53 UTC
What a wonderful look at Praxian culture! I throughly enjoyed your story! You captured emotions and reactions perfectly and in character no less! Great Job! And I loved the ending!

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renegadewriter8 December 9 2010, 20:27:40 UTC
^.^Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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blueeyedwhitt December 9 2010, 19:44:48 UTC
I must agree your story was lovely and the ending was great as well.

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renegadewriter8 December 9 2010, 20:28:02 UTC
Yey glad you liked the ending even though I am still tilting my head at it XD

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prancingtiger86 December 9 2010, 20:05:32 UTC
certainly a different and creative take on the prompt hun, and I felt for Prowl after Fixer's harsh judgement of him. But as per usual Jazz is always there to comfort and reassure him. Fantastically written, loved it! :)

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renegadewriter8 December 9 2010, 20:29:15 UTC
hahaha I was going to do something similar to the other prompts but they beat me too it and didn't want to do something repetitive. I sat there trying to see what else 'frozen' could mean and this came out ^.^

Everyone needs their own personal Jazz me thinks XD Glad you liked it!

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