[FIC] Frozen Wings

[renegadewriter8]

Title: Frozen Wings (4253 words) by ren
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Transformers - All Media Types, Transformers Generation One
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: Author Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
Relationships: Jazz/Prowl
Characters: Jazz, Prowl, Optimus Prime, Smokescreen
Additional Tags: Tragedy, The Fall of Praxus, Praxian Culture,

Comments

[wicked3659]

this is beautifully done. I thoroughly enjoyed it and I love the ending but I would have ended it at the word 'arousal' and let the reader imagine the rest ;) this is fabulous fic, truly well done!

[renegadewriter8]

heheh that was actually the plan, but I thought it needed something more T.T
Glad you liked it!

[prowlsgirl]

Interesting idea for this one. ^_^

[renegadewriter8]

Thanks! ^.^

[gatekat]

I love these cultural explorations. Wonderful writing.

[gatekat]

PS rec-ed it http://community.livejournal.com/improv_logic/12246.html

[renegadewriter8]

First time I did a cultural fic, it was fun XP Oh and thanks for recommending me! *hugs*

[sideslip_tf]

Wow! Just another reminder of why I LOVE doorwings. Wonderful interpretation of the prompt (really creative). I liked the ended as well but if it still bothers you, here is an idea. One more scene where we hear Prowl's thoughts about doorwings and how they convey love? (You didn't specifically ask for ideas so please don't be upset if I'm out of line.)

[renegadewriter8]

Doorwings are love! I'm glad you liked it! Oh don't worry abut it, I'm gonna leave it as it is. But i'm gonna keep it in mind for the future =) Thanks!

[cmdrtekk]

What a wonderful job with the prompt. A well paced story and it flows nicely. You did a great job with the cultural aspects of praxus.

[renegadewriter8]

Thanks a lot! I glad you liked it, I was worried it wouldn't make much sense. ^.^