Merlin: Melt In Your Mouth (Anachronism Remix)

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Original Fic: Delicacy, by lilian_cho
Remix: Melt In Your Mouth (Anachronism Remix) [Merlin/Arthur, 100 Words, Rated PG] by kernezelda

Comments

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[lilian_cho]

Ooh, I love the sense of anticipation in this one =D
And I love how you managed to introduce plot in this drabble, which is rather lacking in my own flopsy X-D

Fav. phrase: whispered of its sweet-sharp flavor, how it made women sweet, too
That reminded me of this one scene in Chocolat *g*

And those last three lines; you made seemingly innocuous actions so sensual <3

Re: <333

[kernezelda]

Thank you! I'm so glad you like it. I've never written Merlin before, but I very much enjoyed your story and it stayed with me through reading the others, so I figured, yep, this is it.

The chemistry between Merlin and Arthur on the show is positively palpable. Mmmmm.

Re: <333

[lilian_cho]

Oh, I'm glad an image stayed with you from the original =D

Yess. You should write more Merlin!

[sophinisba]

I like the image of the foreign merchant, and I like the hopefulness and sensuousness of the Arthur/Merlin in this. :)

[kernezelda]

Thanks! It was fun to write, my first in this fandom. :)