Cracked Pavement (The Road To Hell Remix) [House, MD; Wilson, Cuddy, House; PG.13]]

[deathcab4buffy]

Title: Cracked Pavement (The Road To Hell Remix)
Author: hihoplastic
Summary: 'You were wrong,' she says harshly. His head falls; she sighs. 'We were both wrong.'
Rating: PG.13
Fandom: House, MD
Pairing/Characters: Cuddy, Wilson, House
Title, Author, URL of Original Story: Bironic | Good Intentions

Comments

[hihoplastic]

Thank you very much! As much as the Tritter arc irks me (for all its Vogler Part Two qualities), it annoying fascinates me as well, especially how the dynamic between the three of them changed, the distance it created. I'm glad it came off as relatively objective - there's a lot of blame to go around, but this wasn't meant to pin it on any one person. I'm really glad you enjoyed it; thanks again!

[bironic]

Hello, remixer! (I think I know who you are; you have a distinctive paragraphing style. *g* ) This is awesome. Like a back-door look into Wilson and Cuddy's machinations during the Tritter arc, where they were trying to be helpful but also incredibly manipulative and even dark at the same time, which you brought out here so well. I love that the drabble got sprinkled throughout the remix, and that the reverse/mixed-up timeline shows the consequences of Wilson's line before he utters the words. Very cool!

[hihoplastic]

Heehee. Distinctive paragraph style and/or major grammar issues ;)

I felt bad for choosing a drabble - I absolutely loved your Four Times piano fic, and Be My Valentine, and I tried several times to remix one of your House/Wilson fics and just... failed. Miserably. I love them as a pairing, but can't write them to save my soul. Unfortunately, if it doesn't have Cuddy, I'm totally lost.

But I'm very glad you liked the remix anyway; I loved the original, and the irony of Wilson's words as events in the Tritter arc unfolded.

[deelaundry]

Spare but resonant. I got a little lost on POV sometimes, but you conveyed the House-Wilson-Cuddy disconnects of the Tritter arc, and the ketamine arc before it, well.

[hihoplastic]

I'm always treading that line between intriguingly vague and wtf?. Hee. There was supposed to be a disconnect between all them, though, so I'm glad that came through. Thanks for reading!

[shikabane_mai]

Your POV and writing style is perfect! ♥

How many times do I have to tell you I love you??

[hihoplastic]

*laughs* Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it! I got lucky - the original is excellent; fabulous material to work with. :D

[wanderlonely]

::hugs House/Cuddy/Wilson tight::

[hihoplastic]

They have so much angst, don't they? Poor kids.

;)