Comments | remixredux08: fic: Tentative (The Unsure Remix) (House, Robert Chase/Eric Foreman, PG-13)

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fic: Tentative (The Unsure Remix) (House, Robert Chase/Eric Foreman, PG-13)

Apr 13, 2008 01:33

Title: Tentative (The Unsure Remix)
Author: subluxate
Summary: Five steps toward togetherness.
Fandom: House
Pairing: Robert Chase/Eric Foreman
Rating: PG-13 at the most.
Disclaimer: I don’t own a thing.
Original story: Culpable by sheikah
Notes: Takes place back in the days of the original fellows still being fellows.

( crosswise )

character: robert chase, rating: pg-13, original author: sheikah, remix author: subluxate, pairing: robert chase/eric foreman, character: eric foreman, fandom: house md

Comments 6

zvi_likes_tv April 19 2008, 22:58:39 UTC

I like the play back and forth between them, and the way they're both uncertain.

sheikah April 20 2008, 02:30:53 UTC

...I am ashamed to admit that I didn't even recognize the original fic you took this from on first glance. Wow. You made something that was written ages ago into a really fabulous and really intimate piece.

Like other commenters, I'm really digging how you captured the uncertainty--especially with Foreman, who doesn't show vulnerability well. Great job!

sheikah April 22 2008, 03:28:37 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. I was hoping you would. Picking something small and older was intentional, I have to admit.

tonko April 20 2008, 14:41:20 UTC

Oh, awesome. Love the ending, but also everything before that.

wanderlost April 20 2008, 18:09:29 UTC

This was sweet. I feel as if I'm just repeating what everyone else has said, but the UST, the happy ending, the banter between the three of them were all great.

Fic: Tentative (The Unsure Remix) secondsilk April 27 2008, 11:20:15 UTC

Oh, this is cool.
I do like the tentativeness carried over from the original, and the kind of resolution that they have.
And I love the dynamic between them all.