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kindkit April 22 2007, 17:24:18 UTC
Niiiice. I especially love the scene with Luna experimenting to discover how long it takes a watched pot to boil.

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musesfool May 1 2007, 17:47:20 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

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such_heights April 22 2007, 23:12:10 UTC
Oh, I love your Luna! And the time motif suits her and this story beautifully. So gentle and all round fabulous.

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musesfool May 1 2007, 17:47:34 UTC
Thank you!

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lilacsigil April 23 2007, 01:26:15 UTC
A lovely, gentle look at Luna, which suits the subject at hand perfectly. I loved her experiment, and the whole oddness of Luna's point of view, which, in the end, makes perfect sense.

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musesfool May 1 2007, 17:48:32 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so happy it worked for you, and felt true to her character.

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st_aurafina April 23 2007, 09:04:28 UTC
This is beautiful! I love the way you've drawn the story further back into Luna's past, to give us a chance to know her better - it makes the final section glow.

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musesfool May 1 2007, 17:48:55 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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quietliban April 23 2007, 09:49:37 UTC
This is just...I love this to pieces. I love the way you've fleshed out Luna and created her backstory. It's sad, but it also explains what we know of her from canon.

Luna quickly learns that she's not like the other children at Hogwarts, or that the other children are not quite like her.

I love this line because of the questioning it in, and because Luna as I see her, isn't afraid of questioning, and I suppose that is also seen in the boiling water experiment in the fic. Also, another thing I really like is the explanation of Harry being off and about, because I know that it's something that I didn't say, but implied, and you saying it, makes me very happy. I'm not sure why, but it does.

Overall, this is fantastic, and I don't think I could have hoped for better. Thank you so much!

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musesfool May 1 2007, 17:51:10 UTC
Woo! I'm so happy you like it, and feel like it fits with Luna as you see her. Thank you so much.

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