Comments | remix_redux: Impulse (An Occurrence at 4 Privet Drive Remix) [Harry Potter; Dudley Dursley; Snape/Harry; PG-13]

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Impulse (An Occurrence at 4 Privet Drive Remix) [Harry Potter; Dudley Dursley; Snape/Harry; PG-13]

Apr 18, 2007 15:58

Title: Impulse (An Occurrence at 4 Privet Drive Remix)
Author: Marks (marksykins)
Summary: An impelling action or force - Dudley Dursley trained every day for this moment.
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Snape/Harry (very mild)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Harry Potter is owned by JK Rowling, Scholastic, Raincoast, Warner Brothers, and probably fifty other people ( Read more... )

original author: dracofiend, rating: pg-13, character: harry potter, fandom: harry potter, remix author: marksykins, character: severus snape, character: dudley dursley, pairing: severus snape/harry potter

Comments 4

dracofiend April 22 2007, 22:38:50 UTC

Zoh my god! This is incredible!! :D I laughed so many times--your characterization of Dudley, all those cute and clever turns of phrase!! I have to do a list, even if I WILL be quoting half the fic back at you:

"...he caught the way Harry's eyes instead slid to her brothers (all of them)..."
Ha ha!!!

"He'd heard that Snape was a wanker of the highest degree, the kind of teacher whose food would have got jerked off in at Smeltings..."
God, you're too funny...this is SUCH a guy thing to think, it's so right. :D

"Even if Harry liked to bend over every now and then, it shouldn't be for greasy old men who flapped around in bat robes."
Such a perfect portrayal of the inherent ickiness that is the Snarry pairing! :D I definitely had to get over it before I jumped into the Snarry.

"...Dudley passed out from fear, spilling pickled onions and mustard all down his front."
The timing of this visual was just perfect!! Sloppy scared Dudley jumps off the page.

"...he bulked up, worked out more and more, became invincible, became Bigger Big D ( ... )

dracofiend April 23 2007, 02:43:31 UTC

Hey, me again. :) Just had to say I went and read An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge...and now I like this even better! :D You brilliant, brilliant person you.

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dracofiend April 29 2007, 22:14:29 UTC

Weirdly? No way! That was pure awesomeness! :D Btw, you probably don't remember, but you're like, the first slasher I ever talked to online or in RL (well, the second--the first was your friend who brought me over to talk to you about Harry/Draco, and whose name I'm very sorry escapes me). :D It was at The Witching Hour, when I had only just found out about HP slash! And then I went home and read Oscillate Wildly on Schnoogle that night and loved it! :D Thanks again for the wonderful remix fic!!

lackofmendacity April 23 2007, 05:35:42 UTC

Wow, that was quite a read! :)

(By the way, found you via dracofiend)

I laughed so much in the beginning, Dudley's impression of Snape was incredibly funny :D

I really enjoyed the shift from reality to Dudley's memory, and it echo'd how one's life flashes before one's eyes prior to death. The ending was fitting, albeit very sad. *sniffles*

Thank you for that lovely read. *hugs*