Porcelain (The One That Saves You Remix) [Harry Potter: James/Remus, Remus/Bill]

[jammasterjayne]

Title: Porcelain (The One That Saves You Remix)
Author: fleshdress
Summary: What James gives to Remus has to one day be given to Bill.
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: James/Remus, Remus/Bill
Rating: R to NC-17
Disclaimer: It belongs to JKR, not me.
Title, Author and URL of original story: The Cloak by snegurochka_lee
Notes: Many thanks to my three betas.

Comments

[celandineb]

Wow, what an incredible remix and expansion of that drabble! Interesting take on James -- "cruel philanthropy" indeed. This was a most enjoyable and emotional read.

[fleshdress]

Eee! Thank you so much, darling! I am totally thrilled that you liked it! :)

[snegurochka_lee]

Oh, my dear Remixer!!

I am nearly speechless with glee from this, and just don't know where to begin in all the things I want to say about it. First of all: OMG a drabble?! Brilliant! I was so curious to see which story of mine you would pick, but I admit I never even considered my drabbles! And you know, I think that one was the very first drabble I ever wrote, and while I don't consider myself any sort of talent at drabbling -- it's actually quite difficult for me to do -- I always liked 'The Cloak' more than any other.

So for that alone? *SQUEE* !

And then, what you did with it! Oh oh oh! You are right that it had no business being Gen, none at all, not when I love Remus/James and Remus/Bill as much as I do, and here is the part where I wink at you and wonder aloud if we don't know each other, because there is just so much about this marvellous story that plays right to my very favourite things in fic, starting with those two pairings! So, thank you for adding the pairings and the beautifully erotic scenes. *SQUEE* !! (then, of

[snegurochka_lee]

Eeeeee, fleshdress! Eeeee! Thank you!!

[fleshdress]

♥

[fleshdress]

How can I possibly be equal to this feedback? Seriously, I read your feedback with the biggest, stupidest grin on my face.

I was very daunted at trying to remix anything you'd written because my God you're stuff is pretty much perfect just the way it is and changing anything just seemed wrong and unnecessary - which is why this drabble called to me. You'd told a story in just 100 words and it was all already there for me.

So thank you so so so much for your absolutely unbelievably wonderful response to this. You are all kinds of awesome. *loves*

[midnitemaraud_r]

"Do you feel better?...Well then"

That just about broke me. I can't believe how this story came from such a teeny drabble! Well, okay, I can believe it, because I've seen similar things happen before occasionally, but it's still such and awe-inducing thing to see. This is a truly magnificent story - so beautifully written, so visceral, and I am desperately in love with it. Wonderful!! ♥

[fleshdress]

Eeee! Thank you so so much, darling! I'm so pleased it worked for you because I've never written either pairing before and I was sure all characterisation would get bogged down in my fumbling, so thank you!
*loves*

[archon_mentha]

I love this story. It is so, so warm. I am amazed.

[fleshdress]

*loves you so so so so so much*

[lizardspots]

This is such a beautiful, lyrical, thoughtful fic. I am stunned speechless with awe. ♥

[fleshdress]

Thank you so so much! I am ever so happy to hear it worked so well for you! Thank you! :)