Love of the Loveless, Part 5

[reluctanthero27]

 Love of the Loveless
Pairing: [Sherlock/John]
Rating: T (as of right now)
Time frame: Takes place during a case lull somewhere between episodes 1.2 and 1.3, more or less AU from there.
Summary: Sometimes, the most obvious conclusions are the ones right in front of your face.... or just the one living in your flat. Love won't come easy for Sherlock,

Comments

[dearkiki_fics]

an afternoon trapped in an elevator with Anderson ... Oh, that must be some horrible experience. :D

I love this story so much. And I hope you will post more soon. *is impatient*

[karadin]

I can't read because of formatting.

[karadin]

There is no spacing between paragraphs, if a story is difficult to read viewers will take one quick scan and give up on reading.

[reluctanthero27]

I'll fix that and tell me if it's better.

[mrs_tilford]

So it's comments you want, then? Well, since you ask so nicely...

Probably the most striking thing about this story is the interesting manner in which you present the progression of the Holmes-Watson dynamic without (or perhaps during) the development of what may turn out to be a plot. Their conversations, sniping and otherwise, and mutual confusion are amusing and very satisfying to read - so much more entertaining than if the two men just danced around each other for a few paragraphs and then fell into sex.The.End. (I speak from the experience of having read too many of these disappointing stories.)

I rarely read stories that are still WIP, but in your case I decided to make an exception after the first few lines. The day-to-day give-and-take of, not only their verbal exchanges, but their thoughts is so enjoyable to read. I must say that the journey is at least as fun as their destination.

I hope this brief note will encourage the production of more chapters. Go on, now; I'm waiting. ♥

[reluctanthero27]

Best reader ever?

I think so!

[julnyes]

Sherlock is soo convoluted ^_^ Looking forward to the rest.

[emmainen]

Thank you so much for this, made my day.

[reluctanthero27]

I'm glad, because readers like you make my day.