Love of the Loveless, Part 5

[reluctanthero27]

 Love of the Loveless
Pairing: [Sherlock/John]
Rating: T (as of right now)
Time frame: Takes place during a case lull somewhere between episodes 1.2 and 1.3, more or less AU from there.
Summary: Sometimes, the most obvious conclusions are the ones right in front of your face.... or just the one living in your flat. Love won't come easy for Sherlock,

Comments

[storyshark2005]

oh this is lovely! Both john and sherlock's POVs are wonderful- John is quietly, frustratingly fond of sherlock, and sherlock is uncompromisingly himself- i LOVE how unconcerned with rules of society he is, and how ignorant of them he is. some writers make him overly emotional to make the john/sherlock thing work, but you have done it quite beautifully. bravo and i await the update as impatiently as Sherlock awaits the next case!

[reluctanthero27]

I'm glad you're enjoying it. I really find Sherlock a bit of a challenge to write so I'm happy he's coming out correctly. It's a fine line to balance between his bond with John and his overall attitude towards life.

He will get slightly more emotional as the story goes on, but only emotional for Sherlock. For anyone else it would be more or less an average day :-)

[storyshark2005]

go TEAM you guys are so cool- I think another reason this works so well is the fact that you literally do have 2 voices as well as 2 different POV. It must be fun to write together. And have someone to cheer you on if you get stuck ;) I love this fandom, and have been glad to see the quality fic I've been finding.

Let's all raise our glasses to Mark Gatiss and Steve Moffat *toasts*

[sabrinaphynn]

Enjoying this. Best line so far:
           “You celebrate birthdays?”
My inner snark went wild about this :D

Please I wants some more!

[angelshandprint]

Awwwwwwwwwwww, I spied jealousy, Sherlock. And more awwwwwwwww for cluelessness, but please don't let it be too long, please don't let it be too long xDDD

[fingersofdawn]

NEED MOAR NAO!!!

Ahem. Excuse me. My fic monster reared it's ugly, greedy little head. Sorry about that. I should enjoy it greatly if more of this fic is posted sooner rather than later. Thank you in advance. :)

[azukira_zaruka]

whee~ Please update! :D
This is too cute! <3