Cloneness, 10 and 11

Sep 17, 2005 07:53

Chapter 10 )

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rianax September 20 2005, 01:20:22 UTC
I think I want one of the clone!Heeros-- they are too damm sweet if odd.

And you make me want to become a farmgirl for all these kids. i recommend raising llamas- woolly, meaty, and beasts of burdens.

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yummy! pharaoh_cat September 21 2005, 06:10:41 UTC
I like this story. It's up there on my favourite list next to Garou, now, and i'm not usually a big fan of AU fics. If you're still in need of a name, how about 'Hope'? Seeing as Heero seems to be giving Duo hope that he can find a better life for his kids?

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justkat2790 November 20 2005, 23:25:59 UTC
..."I could stay, right? That would be enough." Heero's voice was soft, strangely unsure.... That line made me cry, more than any other, even though the whole situation is unbelievably poignant. Heartbreaking; in the manner of lost children. I am enjoying this story so much. I would love to read more. Duo's ignorance, and maybe fear, of the country, and its possibilities, really struck a chord. It makes such perfect character sense, and I don't think I've really encountered it before. Thanks heaps. ^_^

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corpus_yaoi October 27 2011, 14:23:32 UTC
awww, it's so cute that Heero doesn't even know that there *is* a "morning after" let alone enough to know that he should be awkward. I also enjoyed their misunderstandings about sleep arrangements, but a part of me did wish that Duo hasn't pushed the "you don't know what you're saying" bit quite so much...Duo knows Heero is only now learning to be social, so pushing the semantics of "want to be with you" seems hard.

Nevertheless, it's so easy--not to mention interesting--to see things from both Duo's and Heero's perspectives, though, and they're both right and wrong. It's wonderfully frustrating.

I wonder what the appearance of the Vultures portends for the group...

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