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threewalls October 13 2011, 21:48:45 UTC
Thanks! ^____^

I had a lot of fun transposing their "canon" history into this world with its different slants. Glad you liked Ran and Jelly, and Kame's complicated relationship with them-- and with Jin.

Kame and Jin do get there in the end. Maybe. ;)

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maiamcw September 27 2011, 18:14:40 UTC
O.o <3

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threewalls October 13 2011, 17:58:17 UTC
<3

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prologuesized September 27 2011, 19:43:46 UTC
Oh, there's part 2 too! Good thing I checked, I sort of followed another link to the fic (even though I had eyed it before thinking I should check it out when I get the time) and and and, well, almost missed this XD Phew.

Ueda's black magic, because honestly, no one's sure what Ueda can do, but there are always bodies on floor that no one else claims.
Quite frankly... this man, once again, scares me XD ♥

Sasha and Jin are also an interesting combination. I'm charmed by your female OCs.

Asdfghjkl the whole part in New York. I don't know what to think, because I like it so much. Also, the ending... You've got me ♥

And I love how you... made... Jin... well... manly with a bit of a feminine side? His desire to be pushed, the make-up at some point, preferring guys... I'm quite happy it's Jin for once who's totally cool with that kind of orientation and Kame hesitating. It's a fresh change.

Great fic overall ♥♥♥ Take hearts, whoever you are! ♥♥♥♥♥

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threewalls October 13 2011, 23:10:05 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed Sasha and Jin, and the other female OCs. I enjoyed coming up with a different take on Jin's characterisation in this different world-- where even though he's happy liking guys (and figures it out much younger) but takes a while to be comfortable admitting that he likes to be pushed.

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wintersdancer September 27 2011, 22:29:47 UTC
I loved the concept and your style ♥ And I really really liked how you wrote all of them, including the female characters.

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threewalls October 13 2011, 23:10:31 UTC
Thanks! I'm very fond of the female characters in this, glad you enjoyed them and the story.

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bellemelody September 28 2011, 00:52:26 UTC
When I start first paragraph I have the image of this PV and their dancing and it was really interesting and great to make such a conception with powers or talented they have, because all PV is just about moving, dance, bit and some mystery.


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