I really enjoyed reading this. I loved Koyama's initial confusion and the twisted Alice feel about the story and the final reveal on who was pulling the strings all the time.
With each new revelation, I’m constantly in awe of the detailed imaginative atmosphere of this universe.
Omg, I’m reading the description of the queen and waiting with bated breath to know who she is :DDD
Irontinman Pi the hero.
LOL I also quite like how scandalous Koyama is being, imagining Junno kissing him with a pair of furry-eared voyeurs present :D
And the sex pretty much left me wordless. So caustic and beautiful all at once. The description was fluid and the mechanics of it were just the right type of explicit and the little snippets of dialogue in between were just perfect.
Not bad, slightly herbal, like the tea. Weird., very weird, but Koyama had been expecting something weirder, strawberry parfait maybe.
LOL Weird indeed.
And they’re so adorable together, fitting together by some string of Pi’s memory of someone like Koyama and Koyama’s unapologetic attraction to him. I adore it.
oyama stared blankly at the empty eye sockets of his own mask sitting on the table next to a cracked china plate.Really interesting 0o0
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PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT. YOUR COMMENTS BREAK ME. HONESTLY. I read them like three times and just wallowed in praise. Thank you honey. Really.
Sorry, I never did say who the red queen was. It wasn't any one person in particular, more the image of Frank-N-Furter from Rocky Horror lol. HA. Ironman. Yeeeeeees XD
I realize I never did link to the original video oops. My formatting was the one I didn't think to look at. The whole cupcake scene is from the music video.
I have to admit, formatting it like that was a lot of fun, and at times annoying because I'd miss closing a tag somewhere. But I'm glad you liked it, I think the original Alice in Wonderland did stuff like that. I thought it might be kind of fun.
8DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD You don't know how hard it was for me when it came to setting that up. There was massive piles of angst where I didn't know if I had revealed enough that it wouldn't seem so random or if I had given away too much and it was like 'why bother?' ;^; that 'aha' moment was what I was REALLY
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked the reveal :3 sneaky isn't he? Thanks for the comment!
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Omg, I’m reading the description of the queen and waiting with bated breath to know who she is :DDD
Irontinman Pi the hero.
LOL I also quite like how scandalous Koyama is being, imagining Junno kissing him with a pair of furry-eared voyeurs present :D
And the sex pretty much left me wordless. So caustic and beautiful all at once. The description was fluid and the mechanics of it were just the right type of explicit and the little snippets of dialogue in between were just perfect.
Not bad, slightly herbal, like the tea. Weird., very weird, but Koyama had been expecting something weirder, strawberry parfait maybe.
LOL Weird indeed.
And they’re so adorable together, fitting together by some string of Pi’s memory of someone like Koyama and Koyama’s unapologetic attraction to him. I adore it.
oyama stared blankly at the empty eye sockets of his own mask sitting on the table next to a cracked china plate.Really interesting 0o0 ( ... )
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Sorry, I never did say who the red queen was. It wasn't any one person in particular, more the image of Frank-N-Furter from Rocky Horror lol. HA. Ironman. Yeeeeeees XD
I realize I never did link to the original video oops. My formatting was the one I didn't think to look at. The whole cupcake scene is from the music video.
I have to admit, formatting it like that was a lot of fun, and at times annoying because I'd miss closing a tag somewhere. But I'm glad you liked it, I think the original Alice in Wonderland did stuff like that. I thought it might be kind of fun.
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You don't know how hard it was for me when it came to setting that up. There was massive piles of angst where I didn't know if I had revealed enough that it wouldn't seem so random or if I had given away too much and it was like 'why bother?' ;^; that 'aha' moment was what I was REALLY ( ... )
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