With each new revelation, I’m constantly in awe of the detailed imaginative atmosphere of this universe.
Omg, I’m reading the description of the queen and waiting with bated breath to know who she is :DDD
Irontinman Pi the hero.
LOL I also quite like how scandalous Koyama is being, imagining Junno kissing him with a pair of furry-eared voyeurs present :D
And the sex pretty much left me wordless. So caustic and beautiful all at once. The description was fluid and the mechanics of it were just the right type of explicit and the little snippets of dialogue in between were just perfect.
Not bad, slightly herbal, like the tea. Weird., very weird, but Koyama had been expecting something weirder, strawberry parfait maybe.
LOL Weird indeed.
And they’re so adorable together, fitting together by some string of Pi’s memory of someone like Koyama and Koyama’s unapologetic attraction to him. I adore it.
oyama stared blankly at the empty eye sockets of his own mask sitting on the table next to a cracked china plate.
Really interesting 0o0
And I think you summed it up pretty succinctly with the term cup-cake gore. Just lol ide :D
I didn’t mention this in the last part but the way you’ve formatted for the sake of effect has just really got me. I love it.
This space here is spectacular.
It was obvious he didn’t belong there. That he was wearing someone else’s ill-fitting shoes. Then he had found Nyanta, a kitten in an alleyway, pitiful cries just loud enough to get his attention over the patter of rain.
;A;
“The Cheshire Cat! Off with his head, again!.” The Queen hollered.
My GOD, that is genius! I quite literally gasped in utter joy. It just felt like an “OF COURSE!” moment here.
Uwa, you quite literally blew my mind here.
“You.”
“Me.” Koyama agreed. “Now get up.”
AWWWW~! <3<3
Felt the Jack seep into him, a new form ready to be used. He would go, he would find Alice, he did miss her so. He would bring her back here where she belonged.
Mind. Blown.. Again!! Jeez, this is a plot to kill all plots. And so interwoven with side-show delights. I am In Love!
No, seriously, this was amazing. I’m wailing this to anyone who’ll listen because it was exactly the type of fic I’ve been wanting to read and didn’t quite know it.
You’re amazing and sooo talented! I’ll always remember this fic <3
PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT. YOUR COMMENTS BREAK ME. HONESTLY. I read them like three times and just wallowed in praise. Thank you honey. Really.
Sorry, I never did say who the red queen was. It wasn't any one person in particular, more the image of Frank-N-Furter from Rocky Horror lol. HA. Ironman. Yeeeeeees XD
I realize I never did link to the original video oops. My formatting was the one I didn't think to look at. The whole cupcake scene is from the music video.
I have to admit, formatting it like that was a lot of fun, and at times annoying because I'd miss closing a tag somewhere. But I'm glad you liked it, I think the original Alice in Wonderland did stuff like that. I thought it might be kind of fun.
8DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD You don't know how hard it was for me when it came to setting that up. There was massive piles of angst where I didn't know if I had revealed enough that it wouldn't seem so random or if I had given away too much and it was like 'why bother?' ;^; that 'aha' moment was what I was REALLY going for. Thank god, like the feeling that now that you know it, everything makes so much more sense? xD I can't even describe the feeling I was going for.
Thank you! I feel rather proud of my plot I have to admit, but hush, I'm modest. I'm glad you enjoyed it. 8DDDD REALLY glad.
Omg, I’m reading the description of the queen and waiting with bated breath to know who she is :DDD
Irontinman Pi the hero.
LOL I also quite like how scandalous Koyama is being, imagining Junno kissing him with a pair of furry-eared voyeurs present :D
And the sex pretty much left me wordless. So caustic and beautiful all at once. The description was fluid and the mechanics of it were just the right type of explicit and the little snippets of dialogue in between were just perfect.
Not bad, slightly herbal, like the tea. Weird., very weird, but Koyama had been expecting something weirder, strawberry parfait maybe.
LOL Weird indeed.
And they’re so adorable together, fitting together by some string of Pi’s memory of someone like Koyama and Koyama’s unapologetic attraction to him. I adore it.
oyama stared blankly at the empty eye sockets of his own mask sitting on the table next to a cracked china plate.
Really interesting 0o0
And I think you summed it up pretty succinctly with the term cup-cake gore. Just lol ide :D
I didn’t mention this in the last part but the way you’ve formatted for the sake of effect has just really got me. I love it.
This space here is spectacular.
It was obvious he didn’t belong there. That he was wearing someone else’s ill-fitting shoes. Then he had found Nyanta, a kitten in an alleyway, pitiful cries just loud enough to get his attention over the patter of rain.
;A;
“The Cheshire Cat! Off with his head, again!.” The Queen hollered.
My GOD, that is genius! I quite literally gasped in utter joy. It just felt like an “OF COURSE!” moment here.
Uwa, you quite literally blew my mind here.
“You.”
“Me.” Koyama agreed. “Now get up.”
AWWWW~! <3<3
Felt the Jack seep into him, a new form ready to be used. He would go, he would find Alice, he did miss her so. He would bring her back here where she belonged.
Mind. Blown.. Again!! Jeez, this is a plot to kill all plots. And so interwoven with side-show delights. I am In Love!
No, seriously, this was amazing. I’m wailing this to anyone who’ll listen because it was exactly the type of fic I’ve been wanting to read and didn’t quite know it.
You’re amazing and sooo talented! I’ll always remember this fic <3
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Sorry, I never did say who the red queen was. It wasn't any one person in particular, more the image of Frank-N-Furter from Rocky Horror lol. HA. Ironman. Yeeeeeees XD
I realize I never did link to the original video oops. My formatting was the one I didn't think to look at. The whole cupcake scene is from the music video.
I have to admit, formatting it like that was a lot of fun, and at times annoying because I'd miss closing a tag somewhere. But I'm glad you liked it, I think the original Alice in Wonderland did stuff like that. I thought it might be kind of fun.
8DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
You don't know how hard it was for me when it came to setting that up. There was massive piles of angst where I didn't know if I had revealed enough that it wouldn't seem so random or if I had given away too much and it was like 'why bother?' ;^; that 'aha' moment was what I was REALLY going for. Thank god, like the feeling that now that you know it, everything makes so much more sense? xD I can't even describe the feeling I was going for.
Thank you! I feel rather proud of my plot I have to admit, but hush, I'm modest. I'm glad you enjoyed it. 8DDDD REALLY glad.
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