Never Never Land Chapter 20 (Gibbs/Tony/Tim threesome, hurt/comfort)

Feb 07, 2010 15:04



Tim watched Gibbs hungrily as he swam through the water strong and sleek. The morning sun sparkled on the clear water as Gibbs slid through the water with swift rhythmic ease. Up and down, up and down his arms moved as lap after lap was completed. Simple efficient tumble turns as Gibbs rolled and pushed off from the wall of the pool. Acres of ( Read more... )

angst, slash, gibbs/tony/tim, threesome, lost boys series, never never land

Leave a comment

Comments 10

fanarts_series February 7 2010, 08:16:41 UTC
This fic became my fav in this universe, i love the leverage between the angst and the love.
It's wonderful, thanks a lot to share with us.

Reply

redvelvetribbon February 7 2010, 08:24:32 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like. Still a little way to go yet

Reply


ruefull February 7 2010, 13:43:40 UTC
I was just thinking of this series yesterday, so this was a lovely surprise to wake up to! **sighs happily** It's just as perfect and good as the chapters before, and I'm thrilled to hear you say there's more to come. It's a gorgeous series, one of my absolute favorites ever, for NCIS.

Reply

redvelvetribbon February 8 2010, 00:29:11 UTC
Well thank you very much. I have put a bit of thought into it, trying to keep all three guys involved in the situation so i'm glad you enjoying it. Thanks for commenting keeps me enthused to continue faster.

Reply


ladyeternal February 7 2010, 14:54:08 UTC
::melts into goo:: Holy wow... if nobody else tells you THIS WAS SO WORTH THE WAIT. I had to open a window in the dead of a New York winter, that sex was so hot. Dayum.

...a private thought buried so deep it was like a jagged metal splinter in his soul.

I completely heart that image. Seriously. It sent chills down my spine. And I could totally hear MW's voice on the 'Hell no.'

I was wondering where you were going with that little teaser about Tony being first! ::grins:: It really was a perfect way for Tim to reach a breaking point about letting Gibbs have him again.

Tony grinned, his hands sticky with his own come as he watched with lazy sated eyes as his two lovers slowly came back to reality and turned to smile at him.

I am sensing sexes for Toy on the horizon. Can't leave him out for long.

“Tony was with you first. He will always be your FIRST. He’s your Senior Field Agent, he’s known you longer. He’s better looking than I am. You were lovers for a long time before I even knew you. He had you FIRST. He is funnier and ( ... )

Reply

redvelvetribbon February 8 2010, 00:14:54 UTC
Phew! Im glad you thougt it worked I stared at it for so long I lost some perspective on it.

Yeah Tony needed to be told he was needed (previous chapter) as he already knows hes loved but Tim needed to really know that he was loved becuase he knows hes needed as part of team etc.

Reply


starbuckssue February 7 2010, 23:25:26 UTC
Beautiful chapter, that was the perfect way to reconnect and overwrite the ugly things that happened to Tim. Loved the way Gibbs invited Tony to watch so he wouldn't feel insecure and unwanted, they just need to make it up to him now!

Reply

redvelvetribbon February 8 2010, 00:10:39 UTC
Thank you. Im glad you enjoyed. Don't worry Tony wont miss out on some loving!

Reply


taylorgibbs February 10 2010, 00:56:11 UTC
What a beautiful gift Tim was able to give Gibbs. I'm glad Gibbs saw deeply into what Tim needed. Wonderfully tender and gentle Gibbs lovemaking scene!

Reply

redvelvetribbon February 10 2010, 02:28:25 UTC
Thank you. I didn't want Gibbs to seem OOC, so Im glad you enjoyed. He really cares and although words fail him sometimes he is always able to come through when his boys need him.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up