Haha, yeah, I remember when I first started reading yaoi, I couldn't do the whole lemon thing. It seriously made me blush. Well, that certainly is no more XD I am glad you still enjoyed it! Thank you :)
The way you wrote him, showed a change that was very dramatic, from his marriage, to the moment he gave in to sexually abusing Squall for the first time, to years after the fact, where he is now focused, manipulative, and cruel, willing to do anything to keep his secret, because there is no going back for him. I'm not sure if you even intended to do so or planned it as part of his development, but I would not be surprised if you did put a lot of thought into showing us bits of pieces of his downfall into an abuser and doomed man, which deep down he must know he is indeed doomed and living on borrowed time. I never considered Seifer and Squall having sex as the climax to this story. I always thought it would be how Kato is stopped. With such a complicated character, I can imagine him putting up the fight of his life, endangering people and all, and I can equally see him not putting up a fight at all once he knows the gig is up. I can see him even having a sense of relief, after so many years of keeping it all together on his side.
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But, their first time together was just a way for them to realize they are indeed in love and can count on each other. In Squall's own words "I'm no longer alone." I did not interpret that as Sex With Seifer=Alternative to Cutting Myself. Because at the end of the day, after being raped, you are not going to go running to have sex with some one else no matter how much you love and trust them. Squall does know now that he has Seifer's love and support though. He know's Seifer isn't just about getting in his pants. He never truly knew that before. All of this new trust I imagine will give Squall the openness with Seifer he needs to finally show enough raw pain where Seifer can finally put two and two together. And that's when shit will go down, no matter who finds out first, Seifer will find out soon after anyway
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I forgot to mention that I am guilty of loving this story so much I even drew a fanart.....which I have never shown to anyone because its of infamous Chapter 21 extra related. >.x; I guess that's why people in my house just looked down hiding their looks of despair when I brought an art tablet home.
So I started this chapter while listening to an anime radio station and just as Seifer starts thinking about his arousal the final fantasy 8 opening theme begins. XD Win Gero Gero Radio, win!
So now that I've finished reading, I would like to leave a proper review.
I've been following WS since 2005, I've waited for nearly every chapter and following the story and even the up's a down of the author's own life. This story has brought tears to my eye more then once, but this was the first time I bawled after reading a lemon. THIS STORY IS AMAZING! Words can not describe the range of emotions I have gone through just reading this chapter alone, not to mention all the chapters before it. My heart has never felt so justly satisfied, it was your first lemon and like it's chapter name it was beautiful.
Don't ever scare me with saying ' I am quitting Whispered Screams' again, my heart will stop. I love this story and I love you too <3 (not in the stockerish I want to find you way) but as an author I will always love you. I'm thankful that even after all these years your still writing, and that you plan to finish this story. I can;'t praise it enough really.
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I've been following WS since 2005, I've waited for nearly every chapter and following the story and even the up's a down of the author's own life. This story has brought tears to my eye more then once, but this was the first time I bawled after reading a lemon. THIS STORY IS AMAZING! Words can not describe the range of emotions I have gone through just reading this chapter alone, not to mention all the chapters before it. My heart has never felt so justly satisfied, it was your first lemon and like it's chapter name it was beautiful.
Don't ever scare me with saying ' I am quitting Whispered Screams' again, my heart will stop. I love this story and I love you too <3 (not in the stockerish I want to find you way) but as an author I will always love you. I'm thankful that even after all these years your still writing, and that you plan to finish this story. I can;'t praise it enough really.
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