[Fic] (UNTITLED!ME2 fic)

[redhoundstooth]

Miranda despised Omega. The sight, the smell, all of it invaded her senses in a putrid manner. She was anticipating the decontamination process like it was a gift she will be treating herself to.

So when she helped Shepard and Jacob lug the turian, Archangel, onto the Normandy shuttle cruiser, she felt pure relief as the door closed away the

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[redhoundstooth]

I was worried about the perspective change. When I put in the equal signs, I use those to symbolize elapsed time, while the hyphens are just switches of scenes but it takes place around the same time but I think that still might be too confusing, unless I just state it at the beginning. I do want to keep the different character perspectives but it might take away from the point... a lot to think about

[redhoundstooth]

I'll take your extra hyphen thing into consideration. Actually that last part was always a bother for me because I was wondering if it even seemed like something that could happen in the game. I know fan fiction doesn't have to be totally canon but I do want to make something sound plausible