Comments | redemptionday: Torchwood: Broken Echo

slartibartfast in redemptionday

Dec 16, 2007 13:57

Title: Broken Echo
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Ianto, Jack
Rating: R
Warnings: Blood and violence.
Summary: Ianto gets a glimpse of Jack and Torchwood's past through the ghost machine.
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( They didn't notice the breath rush from his body as the room melted down into muted colours, blurred edges, empty floors. )

Comments 6

kickair8p December 16 2007, 15:19:40 UTC

wow.

~

slartibartfast December 16 2007, 15:43:53 UTC

I hope that's a good wow!

Thank you. :)

ru_salki99 December 16 2007, 15:44:23 UTC

Aw, poor Jack. That must have been horrible to experience. And poor Ianto having to watch it. Loved it though. Brilliant.

pqueen December 16 2007, 15:57:11 UTC

I'll second the wow. And yes. It's a very good wow.

rubydreamer December 17 2007, 01:42:50 UTC

I wonder who the stranger was. Great story, so full of emotion. Well done.

love_jackianto December 17 2007, 07:03:22 UTC

Very good story. Poor Jack, Ianto and stranger.