Actually, your writing exhibits a high level of paranoia, indicating to a neurological disorder like Schizophrenia or something similar. The phrase "Organise before they Rise" is repeated many times, meaning you consider it to be the most important component of the essay. However, who "they" are is unclear. Also, the disintegration into near-rambling shows a break in the cognitive functions, further indication of a neurological meltdown.
...I'm still trying to make out the significance of your drawings.
I object! Amendment 57 CLEARLY states that artistic license may be taken in the event of a felonious crime. Breaking and entering and attempting to eat my flesh are both felonies.
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Do you think, perhaps, you might need to go to the Med ward? Organize before who rises?
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...I'm still trying to make out the significance of your drawings.
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Philistine!
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