Fic: I Bruise Easily - R/L - NC-17

Jul 21, 2010 09:38

Title: I Bruise Easily
Pairing: Rimmer/Lister
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own the boys, but if anyone's interested in putting some money into a kitty, I shall proposition Mr Naylor...
Notes: This fic acts as the pre-cursor to Between the Lines - depicting the event that inspires Rimmer to return ( Read more... )

writing: fan fiction, author: missflibble

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cassiopeia13 July 21 2010, 16:06:30 UTC
Sad and sweet all at once

I hope there's more where Listy and Rimsy stop beatin around the bush and actually get together.

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missflibble July 22 2010, 06:15:25 UTC
Thank you much!

Indeed, I shall eventually get around to a sequel to 'Between the Lines' where Rimmer and Lister do FINALLY get it on. I just need the muse or the plot bunny to help me out. It'll show up eventually, it's probably running late. Traffic and all that, you know...

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cassiopeia13 July 22 2010, 13:26:22 UTC
Haha! I completely understand how that is. My co-author and I have been writing an original that's going on 7 years! Take your time.

Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so glad someone's writing actual Listy/Rimsy fics that aren't just "Implied" which seems to be the majority out there lately.

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missflibble July 22 2010, 14:16:06 UTC
To be honest most of my slash fics have been implied, only two involve actual ACTION. All good fun though, right? ;-)

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veronica_rich July 21 2010, 20:39:05 UTC
I have to say first of all that this is almost as hot as 10 pages of detailed sex: Lister ran gentle fingers across the rough bobbles of the towel, hooking his fingers under the fold tucked into the waistline. Tearing his gaze away, Rimmer let his head drop back to the pillow, a guttural moan finding its release as he felt Lister pull the towel apart to expose his now-very-ready erection.The metaphor of Rimmer stripping off, almost afraid to face even himself and not even wanting to cry alone, was great. I don't know if you've lived alone for any length of time at any point, but this is actually pretty accurate IMO - living with someone means you go be alone if you want to be weak a lot of times, but if you're by yourself nearly all the time, like Rimmer would be (not counting his computer), not even being alone is a good enough excuse many times ( ... )

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missflibble July 22 2010, 06:21:46 UTC
I have to say first of all that this is almost as hot as 10 pages of detailed sex: Lister ran gentle fingers across the rough bobbles of the towel, hooking his fingers under the fold tucked into the waistline. Tearing his gaze away, Rimmer let his head drop back to the pillow, a guttural moan finding its release as he felt Lister pull the towel apart to expose his now-very-ready erection.*blush* Thank you! I had every intention of going all the way with it, as t'were, but it seemed to fit much better NOT seeing it - just seeing a teasing glimpse. Besides, I felt it would have more of an impact in the series if we get treated to the full thing when Rimmer and Lister FINALLY realise how they feel. Plus? Your after-sex fic is hotness on a stick, you don't always NEED to see it all, right? *fans herself ( ... )

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fearcat July 21 2010, 22:11:16 UTC
omg that was amazing and HOT hehe...

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missflibble July 22 2010, 06:23:01 UTC
Yay! ^__^ Glad you enjoyed it my dear (and a very nice icon there too!)

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notalwaysweak July 22 2010, 07:58:09 UTC
Beautiful and sad and hot. Your writing is wonderful, as ever.

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missflibble July 22 2010, 08:06:32 UTC
*blush* Thank you dearest. <3

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ultrapeach July 22 2010, 22:55:12 UTC
Wow, so sad. =( Lister...
Great fic.

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missflibble July 23 2010, 06:16:47 UTC
*sniff* Poor poor Lister...

Thanks for reading!

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