Characters: Elizabeth, Jack, Gibbs Rating: G Length: 300 words Status: Complete Note: Written for Day Three of the Twelve Days of Christmas Holiday Ficathon 2010 at blackpearlsails
That was lovely. Your prose has such poetry in it. Beautifully written, and a much appreciated offering for the third day of our twelve days celebration! Thank you.
Thank you - the original story is so beautiful and haunting, and I tried to let this little snippet reflect that. Thank you again for covering for me when I couldn't post this, and for hosting the twelve days celebration in the first place :)
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it - the story of the Holly King and the Oak King has always been a favorite of mine, and it was a joy to tell it here. It's about hope more than anything else, and I'm thrilled the final line conveyed that!
Yes, and even if there is no plants. I always observe it anew, when go to take photos of winter. So many shades and hues of blue and gold. Snow, sunshine, water, ice... and dandified mallards. :)
Thank you! The first thing that popped into my head when geekmama posted this was the story about the Holly and Oak kings - it immediately struck me as a tale Jack would tell :D
The relatives were unexpected, but a welcome surprise nonetheless. Happy Holidays to you!
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Happy Holidays to you too!
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And no need to apologize for the delay. At this time of year we're all having stuff sprung on us.
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The relatives were unexpected, but a welcome surprise nonetheless. Happy Holidays to you!
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