Comments | redbells: Pirates fic: it takes an ocean not to break; part five

redbells

Pirates fic: it takes an ocean not to break; part five

Jul 15, 2011 17:51

Pairings: Will/Elizabeth, Jack/Elizabeth
Rating: PG-13
Length: 319
Status: WIP
Notes: Written for djarum99 for help_japan

( Thread in hand, I wander the labyrinth. )

potc, elizabeth swann, will/elizabeth, #fic, jack/elizabeth

Comments 8

whensheflies July 17 2011, 03:54:45 UTC

Nnngh. Teague's smile! I can see it in my head, how proud he must be. I'm glad to see Elizabeth getting back on her feet and back into action. I am loving the journey this story is taking us on.

redbells July 18 2011, 19:27:22 UTC

Thank you - I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! There's quite a bit more to be posted, and still more to be written :)

Also, Teague = ♥

geekmama July 17 2011, 17:06:58 UTC

How this made me smile!

I do adore your descriptions of Shipwreck Cove, and Teague watching over her, in his own fashion.

redbells July 18 2011, 19:29:15 UTC

Thank you - I'm so glad I made you smile!

Teague is looking after her, but he does have ulterior motive - he's a pirate, after all :)

beautyfrompain July 19 2011, 20:21:25 UTC

I love how strong she is amidst her fear, it's a wonderful combination.

redbells July 19 2011, 20:23:44 UTC

Elizabeth in unimaginably strong - that's part of why I love her :)

hereswith August 22 2011, 17:17:31 UTC

“Pirates,” she calls, “who is your King?" Yay! Loved that she finally knows her purpose again, and how Teague grins like it's what he's been waiting for. Great descriptions of Shipwreck Cove too.

redbells January 7 2012, 22:49:32 UTC

Years late in responding to this, but thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter - I'm slowly getting back to working on the fic, so expect more sometime soon :)