Pirates fic: it takes an ocean not to break; part three

Jul 10, 2011 19:21

Pairings: Will/Elizabeth, Jack/Elizabeth
Rating: PG-13
Length: 259
Status: WIP
Notes: Written for djarum99 for help_japan

No easy passage. )

potc, elizabeth swann, will/elizabeth, #fic, jack/elizabeth

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beautyfrompain July 11 2011, 20:23:02 UTC
I'm so in love with this! You make me anxious to see the next part every time. I haven't thought much about what Elizabeth would have gone through/felt after that time, but this whole series is making my heart break for her. Love it, keep up the amazing work!

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redbells July 12 2011, 21:01:20 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you're loving it - I'm having a ton of fun exploring how Elizabeth must have felt after AWE :) There'll be more soon!

*cuddles comment*

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djarum99 July 13 2011, 04:51:21 UTC
I love Teague's appearance on the dock, and I'm looking forward to seeing his role in this. Brava ♥

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redbells July 13 2011, 18:50:08 UTC
Thank you! Teague is a schemer, and he has some unexpected cards up his sleeves - I'm really having fun writing him :)

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redbells July 18 2011, 19:39:05 UTC
Ok so I fail at replying in a timely manner, but here I am!

Yes. Teague is amazing :)

I didn't originally have that line in the story, but I just felt like I had to add it: Jack guesses (correctly) that she won't stay on the island, Teague guesses (correctly) that she'll come back to Shipwreck Cove. Elizabeth is the only one who's out of the loop, and she's damn sick of it. Of course, she's too tired to really get worked up at the moment. That will come later :P

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hereswith August 22 2011, 17:04:39 UTC
It can't have been an easy situation and I think you've managed to convey that and Elizabeth's emotions very well in these!

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redbells January 7 2012, 23:13:35 UTC
Thank you my dear! Elizabeth is in a very tough situation here, and so much has already happened to her - it's been very interesting exploring how she must have felt after everything.

Thanks for the read and the write!

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