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Fic: Jaded

May 19, 2008 22:57

Title: Jaded
Author: sylum_river_tam
Fandom: Reaper
Pairing: No Pairing
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 653
Prompt: Jaded
Warnings: Character Death! And the Devil! And Evil Scary Clowns! And Bean Bags! not betaed

I wrote this a little while ago for the Jaded prompt at smallfandomflsh which is an awesome little community that you should check out and then write fic for :)

( Jaded: made dull, apathetic, or cynical by experience or by surfeit )

character: sam, character: bert "sock" wysocki, character: the devil, rating: pg13, author: sylum_river_tam

Comments 8

strifechaos May 20 2008, 05:47:39 UTC

The last line is just so haunting. Very well done, you really captured the characters amazingly.

kristories May 20 2008, 15:03:04 UTC

Thank you :)

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kristories May 20 2008, 15:04:07 UTC

I know, I didn't mean to, it just sort of happened. The Devil made me do it?? *looks shifty*

tessykins May 20 2008, 17:19:36 UTC

Whoa. Despite the warning, totally didn't see that coming. That last lines makes me shiver. Lovely.

kristories May 20 2008, 17:49:12 UTC

Thanks :) I didn't really plan on writing it, it started out funny but it just didn't want to stay that way. At least I haven't been flamed for it :)

tessykins May 21 2008, 03:27:14 UTC

Hee. I know how that can happen. You start with fluff, and then all of a sudden there's bodies everywhere. Flames would be silly; this isn't the Pit. :D

nikki_cee May 21 2008, 02:50:39 UTC

Great job =) and killimg Sam? Did not see that coming. And I agree about that line, creepy and haunting.

kristories May 21 2008, 14:45:45 UTC

I'm glad you liked it :)