Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 13

[realynn8]

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 13
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

Comments

[prettypony39]

oh. my. god.

I knew this chapter was going to be a huge reveal but seriously...wow. I'm in complete awe of this story. I cannot wait for Jasper's side of this tale.

You're good. I'm still in shock from that reveal...
*refresh* Jasper? *refresh*

[realynn8]

Thank you so much. I was really nervous about this chapter, not sure whether I went into the right direction. I am really glad you liked it. :)

Thank you so much!

[realynn8]

Yeah, me too. I am right there beside you.

They both annoy me now and then. :) But I hope they will make it up to you in the future chapter. :)

Thank you so much. I have been on edge posting this chapter, not knowing what the readers will think and how they will accept it. So, thank you. :)

[lys_chan_83]

WOW!

It was a really HUGE misunderstanding...

Poor Jasper, Poor Alice.

This was a awesomw chapter, and everything finally makes sense. You are an amazing writer.

What I don't get is why Alice kept all that to herself; I understand, to a certaint level and even if I don't agree with her, why she didn't tell Jasper, but why she didn't trust in her friends? I don't mean to resolve her problems, but just to talk, for catharsis?

Oh, I don't know why, but the part of his book about the hero "whoring around" catch my eye. Odd

[realynn8]

Thank you so much, I am really glad you liked it. :)

It was, and they both made mistakes. Messed up.

More on Alice in the next chapter, she had her reasons, although she was a little stupid. She was hurt and didn't want to admit it out loud. :)

Don't worry, only the first part of the book is about Jasper and Alice, the second part (where the whoring is mentioned) was just his imagination. :)

[applecandy22]

aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! obsession!! woi woi!!!
I really liked it.
Thanks a lot for this entry. I've been waiting a long time!
Good work! I hope they can work it out and will be licking each others wounds!!! I can't wait!!!
As always you are a talented writer!

[realynn8]

Thank you so much. :) I am glad you liked it.

And yeah, I am sure they will make it somehow. ;)

[applecandy22]

Here's a nice picture of Alice and Jasper's home could look like! I think this would be perfect for them.With all the snow!!!

[realynn8]

I love the pic and I think it suits very well. I will add it to the story and post the link to this pic at ffnet, too. Thank you for this, sunshine.

[applecandy22]

you know, I thought about your fic I said, what if Jasper was supposedly cheating with a girl named "Maria" and here it is! you use the same name! this is like...wow! I am so happy!!!

[realynn8]

Yeah,I planned this since the beginning and I remember well when you said that, but I couldn't really comment on it, because I would give the secret away. But your comment did make me giggle. :)

[applecandy22]

lol!!!

[realynn8]

Yup. :)