Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 13

Jun 13, 2009 12:15

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 13
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.


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andre07hsm June 14 2009, 05:44:44 UTC
OMGGGGG
I loved,loved,loved,loved,loved,loved,loved,loved,loved,lovedloved,loved,loved,loved,loved,loved,................
was amazing!!!
poor jazz and alice...they were not to blame for what happened..I hate maria!!!!
this was one of the best chapters,
but please mon, don´t make me wait to long for the next :D please please please.....:)

thanks for the chapter..was awesome!!!

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realynn8 June 14 2009, 09:25:00 UTC
Oh, thank you so so much. :) *hugs*
Yay for liking it.

I will try to do my best to update as soon as possible. :)

And thanks again.

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luv_faith_dream June 14 2009, 08:46:37 UTC
Omg the chapter was amazing! I'm still shaking;) and you did great with the big secret! Sometimes when a story is focused on this one big secret once it comes out it isn't very convincing, but this was perfect! Not only was it really shocking, but it absolutely fit! The way you explained it, everything made total sense and is really believable!!! Aw poor Alice, poor Jasper, I don't know whom I feel more sorry for:)
LOVED it!!!!!

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realynn8 June 14 2009, 09:20:56 UTC
Aww, thank you so much. I was really nervous about pulling this off, so your review really made my day. :) I am so happy you liked it and that it is believable. Thank you! :)

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rurouni_yasha June 14 2009, 23:57:00 UTC
I've been waiting for this forever it feels like.
i read it before i had to go to work and i ended up a couple of minutes late but I couldn't pull away. I can't wait for more

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realynn8 June 16 2009, 09:15:54 UTC
Aww, thank you so much. I am really excited that you like it. :)

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omg kitty_boots14 June 15 2009, 23:20:20 UTC
that was the best chapter yet. hope to read more soon.

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Re: omg realynn8 June 16 2009, 09:16:10 UTC
Thank you so much. :) Woohoo!

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first_moon June 17 2009, 00:04:44 UTC
yaay! 'got goosebumps everywhere! I knew it,this is the part I've been waiting for! 'can't wait for the 2nd part.
thanks so much Mon!

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realynn8 June 17 2009, 08:58:27 UTC
You are very welcome, hun. I am glad you liked it. :):)

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