Fic: A Secret Relationship Unlike Any Other 3/4

[readwitch]

 A/N: Alright, I lied. One more part after this. I started the resolution, but ended up backtracking, so this basically Rachel’s POV on the situation.

Enjoy.

(The Final Part will be up soon)
Chap 1, Chap 2,

Part 3: From The Eyes of the Ingénue

Comments

[yumeillustrated]

Well, I'm not sure if I should be saying this, but I'm glad you lied! (about this part being the finale! :D)

I'm applauding in happiness right now (in my head, but still), and I eagerly await your next (final already? :'() installment.^^
Good effort on the song. xD
Take care, stay safe and thank you very much for sharing! :)
Have a great day!

[ayden07]

I LOVE THAT SONG!!! Thank you for Rachel's POV on all this. Her strategic planning with Finn failed because Finn is an ass!! I hate the Finn character on the show, probably told you that already. Anyway, I love how Rachel feels responsible for fixing Quinn's heartache. This is just great and I cant wait for the ending! =) You made me happy today!

[winstonta]

Nicely done yet again :)

[djkaceykane]

Soooooo many things to love about this part of the story!

I heart that Rachel calls out the all of the glee club's spades...Finn's hypocrisy, Quinn's love/hate relationship with her, Artie's misogynistic ways...that whole section made me want to bite a line from Kevin McHale--"PREACH!"

Moving on...

Somewhere between the bout of laughter brought on by Jesse's sexual appeal being compared to that of a mannequin, the destroying of Finn's Axe spray, and Rachel's special hallway privileges for when she had the urge to sing through a crowded hall my hangover headache got a million times worse (but it was so worth it).

Poor, poooooor Finn infallible human element in this equation. Damn man, just...damn. *smh*

Finally, I'd like my own personal Rachel Berry to keep ME on track with “Say and Don’t Say” note cards, kitty calendars, and a big ol' Bedazzled day planner. :D

Can't wait to read the rest!

[readwitch]

Haha, it's funny because I actually do like Jesse and Jonathon Groff, but, at this point, Rachel just seems completely uninterested in him. Plus, he's basically the Derek Zoolander of Show Choir, right? Rachel's just the type that finds success attractive.

But, I think the "Say and Don't Say" cards are a little ironic since Rachel, at the best of times, probably needs her own set.

[djkaceykane]

Aaaaaw, I think Canon!Rachel has been fairly decent to Quinn considering what Quinn's put her through. :)

ZOMG, I was trying to think who Jesse reminded me of and you hit the nail SQUARE on the head! LOL

[readwitch]

Oh, yeah, totally decent. Rachel can be a saint, really. But one of my favorite things about her is her lack of a filter.

And, yeah, there's more to Jesse than just being really really good looking. He can also sing and dance good and wants to do other stuff good too. (It has been a long time sense I've seen the movie...)

[malexfaith]

Hehe, love the song. I'm goig to be dancing around at work tomorrow singing this version. Great to read this pov. Awesome writing. Thanks heaps for sharing