"Pirate Vindaloo" by
elessiland
Hipperdiva First (stopped) reading: 26.11.2008 at chapter 10 of 26.
Comment:PV has so many inconsistencies on so many levels that one's left looking around, wondering where to start criticizing: the characterization that changes to serve the plot? The characterization that's OCC to get fluffy (I stopped reading then, I thought that 73
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