The Truth Wins Out, Everytime

Oct 21, 2010 00:00


New Adam fic.  Enjoy!

Title:  The Truth Wins Out, Every time

Author:  Razzie2414

Characters:  John, Dean, Sam, Adam, mention of Bobby

Scenario:  AU, (the old West), with Dean, Sam, and Adam's ages a few years apart, perhaps 17, 14, and 12, respectively

Implements:  hand, strap

Purpose:  Minx's Challenge, now just for fun

Summary:  John decides to bring ( Read more... )

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spankedbyspike October 21 2010, 06:22:03 UTC
Wow, there were so many Adam stories... Maybe we should do challenges more often!

You got me really worried for a while bout John giving it real hard to Dean, I can't express how relieved I was to find out that Adam nailed his own coffin in the nick of time: thank you.

I get it you are suspicious of Adam? I loved how you built up the drama all the way to the mighty spanking at the end, yeah you!

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razzie2414 October 22 2010, 21:43:32 UTC
To be honest, I don't like the Adam character. I guess I thought John would be celibate after Mary, but the whole "here's your long-lost brother" idea makes me grind my teeth.
Glad you enjoyed it, I was worried about it. I had rushed it to make Minx's deadline and then everything changed. Your comment encouraged me. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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spankedbyspike November 1 2010, 05:00:16 UTC

I get your point. I was really weary about Adam, and to this day he is not a favorite character of mine.

Still, the challenge forced me to see it as a person, give him incentives, a perspective, so I can say that I get him more now than when the episodes with him ran.

I took my time with my first story so I felt rushed too with my second one, which explain why I am not posting my second one yet, I think it needs some work... soon maybe.

It will always be a pleasure to read and review your work babe, just post it... And, if you need help ahead of the game, I am game too, just pm me!

Now, you just made me long for cowboys fics...

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razzie2414 November 1 2010, 05:21:16 UTC
Thanks again for your very warm comments. It made my day! I'm glad you want to keep reading and reviewing. I needed that little stroking of my ego... you rock!
I realize it's not Adam's fault John couldn't keep it in his pants, but still.
Let's write MORE cowboys fics!!! Whatdya say?

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saberivojo October 21 2010, 10:51:43 UTC
I love cowboy!fic! *bounces* Something about the Winchesters in the West that makes my heart go pitter patter. I have been writing a non-spanking cowboy!fic for so long that it is beginning to grow roots!

Enough of my cowboy!obsession.

Adam really deserved it here and I am glad he got it! I think it is cool that John knows something is wrong, but expected his boys to tell the truth when asked. Silly John! But I imagine Dean will be a little more forthcoming next time.

The Adam!fic thing has been fun. We should do more challenges even if there are no prizes because the prize we all get is great fic and fun.

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razzie2414 October 22 2010, 21:47:55 UTC
All along I've been waiting for some more cowboy!Winchester fic- someone wrote some before. Being originally from Texas myself,(like Jensen and Jared!), I was happy to do them as rancher/hunters/cowboys.
I knew John was going to be suspicious, he's too smart to miss the signs. I wanted to paint Adam as a 'city kid' brat. Glad you liked it.
I may lay off challenges for awhile. We'll see.

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razzie2414 October 22 2010, 21:49:19 UTC
I know, right? Bad Adam! Sam was so worried the truth wouldn't come out, that Dean was taking the rap for it all. Glad you liked my ending. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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atalantaj October 21 2010, 19:14:01 UTC
Nice job! It's always nice getting a new fic and i'm glad everyone is posting their stories from Minx's challenge. I felt really bad for Dean here, taking the blame for Adam's bad behavior, but it's true to his character. He's the peace keeper in the family. I'm glad things got sorted out at the end, and the western setting was fun. Thanks for sharing.

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razzie2414 October 22 2010, 21:51:30 UTC
I'm sooo glad that Dean came out the way I intended for him to- he is always so full of guilt and willing to take the blame. It pleases me that you thought it was true to his character. And thanks for the compliment on a nice job.
Thanks for reading!

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vyvsy October 21 2010, 22:52:19 UTC
OOh, the little bugger! What a young pain~in~the~arse! Good job John found out butter definitely wouldn't have melted in Adam's mouth;p. Well done:) xxx

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razzie2414 October 22 2010, 21:53:40 UTC
Adam seems like he could be such a little brat on the show. I like the actor more or less, but I don't like them having an additonal brother, and it may have come out in my story. I had fun writing it. Thanks for reading and replying.

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