Title: Rainy Day Rest Author: razycrandomgirl Rating: G Fandom: Firefly Timeline: pre-series Character(s): Serenity and early crew Disclaimor: These charaters are totally not mine. :-) AN: Dedicated to
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Oh, I love it! I love the perspective. Took me a few paragraphs to realize Serenity was narrating, bu then it was like sinking into a voice you can trust utterly.
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT!
I just wanted to post something for you while you were recovering. I really need to get the tech speak down. I will definitely try harder next time. :-D
I think you should post this on one of the FF fic comms. It's really good. I love hearing Serenity's viewpoint, especially of Zoe and Wash and his hands.
You's a good mood setter, young'un.alexis_laforgeSeptember 10 2007, 03:47:47 UTC
I can feel the rain, smell the rain... and the rain is shexy. Although that may be in part some of the 'problem' we were discussing before, cause the rain's not supposed to be shexy. But it is. Just maybe.
Captain’s lying on his back trying to be still enough to catch some kind of peace
I can finally tell ya how well that captures the man. He can be all kinds of irritatin', but that there desription is why he's still the man folk follow.
And the rest... yeah, odd match them two, but it made sense in that weird way that Serenity makes things make sense.. ya know?
I love Mal too. And I think I understand him even a little bit. Thanks for saying and for the wonderful feed back you gave that helped me give better a grasp on the story.
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They were still in the assembly phase.
How beautiful is that?!
Thank you so much!
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I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT!
I just wanted to post something for you while you were recovering. I really need to get the tech speak down. I will definitely try harder next time. :-D
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Ps I love the hands of Wash ... and other parts of him. :x
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And I love the word "Shexy".
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I can finally tell ya how well that captures the man. He can be all kinds of irritatin', but that there desription is why he's still the man folk follow.
And the rest... yeah, odd match them two, but it made sense in that weird way that Serenity makes things make sense.. ya know?
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Sure feel like these times were a long time back... 'ceptin' those feelin's never do fade, dong ma? >;^)
Been missin' those visits from the Muse... life just gets to full up with things that don't always flow smooth...
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