Among the Fields (fic)

Jan 19, 2010 00:10


Title: Among the Fields

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: G

Word Count: 451

Characters/Pairings: Alejandro, Maya

Disclaimer: Don’t own.

Spoilers/Time Line: Vol.2 AU

Summery: "Sights and sounds pull me back down another year ... I was here ...  I was here ..." Tori Amos

Author’s Notes: I had 'Fields of Gold' on a loop and now 'Gold Dust' won't leave me alone ( Read more... )

fic, maya herrera, heroes, 100 maya stories!

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albion1919 January 19 2010, 15:39:53 UTC
Oh that was so lovely! Spooky and sad, poor Ale, always watching out for her.

Anna! Aww, she's so cute! (I don't know why but I always picture her, if she did have a kid, with a girl)

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razycrandomgirl January 19 2010, 18:34:19 UTC
Maybe because there's a serious need for estrogen in canon and fanon.

And their relationship is very interesting, if she had a boy it might be like another male replacement for the other (failed) relationships in her life. If she's with a girl her daughter will teach her to be a better woman. Otherwise she might be dependent on her son ... maybe. And it will be another cycle. (i.e. Virginia & Gabriel).

Though Maya's not crazy ...

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albion1919 January 19 2010, 19:14:49 UTC
Oh, that's a very interesting idea (speaking of read this)

I think at the heart of it she would have to overcome her vulnerability, of being alone and raising a child as a single mother would certainly do that. I think she's strong but got hang ups (backstooory, where are you? lol)

Course not, all her fries are in the Happy Meal...

(have you watched BH yet?)

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razycrandomgirl January 19 2010, 23:19:17 UTC
Thank you so much for that link. I love it. AND I LOVE MAYA and EDEN! \o/

BTW the kinda mention Eden (though I missed it).

I think she would be a mama bear and take what she learned from her brother and use it to raise her child.

I like what bellonablack came up with when she did that story where Maya told Sylar/Gabriel her back story about when she first used her powers. For some reason I don't think the time at the wedding reception was her first encounter with her character.

I dl'ed it but haven't watched it yet.

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paynesgrey January 25 2010, 15:51:05 UTC
Lovely. I really enjoyed the tone throughout this. Great work. There just isn't enough fic for Maya and her brother. I'm glad people are still writing them. <3

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razycrandomgirl January 28 2010, 22:03:16 UTC
Hear, hear! Thank you for telling me. :D

Sweet icon!

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sanguinepen January 25 2010, 16:13:27 UTC
*wibble* Beautiful word painting, lovely visuals.

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razycrandomgirl January 28 2010, 22:04:32 UTC
thank you for letting me know what you thought. ;D Sorry about the wibble.

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h0pefulregret January 25 2010, 18:53:41 UTC
Awww! I'm not normally a Maya fan but I really, really loved this! So wonderfully written and such beautiful imagry. Great job hun!

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razycrandomgirl January 28 2010, 22:05:53 UTC
Aww that makes it even better that you're not a fan and can still sympathize. *hugs* And Thank you! :D

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illusional_you January 25 2010, 19:44:18 UTC
This was very beautiful and sad.

Great job

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razycrandomgirl January 28 2010, 22:08:07 UTC
It seemed like all of the fics for the challenge were a bit melodically. I hope the next one is a bit brighter.

Thanks for the kind words and taking the time to read it. :D

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