Trick of the light

[razycrandomgirl]

Author: Razycrandomgirl

Title: Trick of the Light.

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: PG-13

Characters/Pairings: Maya/Sylar

Disclaimer: Don’t own them, just like to play with them sometimes.

Spoilers/Time Line: AU post 'Powerless'.

Summery: Prompt #12 from my un_love_you Saya table 'I'm Drunk',

Author’s Notes: Thanks to gimmemypickle  for giving it a quick once over. If

Comments

[bellonablack]

I like this Maya, her reaction is totally natural. No wonder she feels this way about people, men specifically, taking advantage of her.

Sylar is great here, because clearly...well, clearly, he's obsessed, possessive. I wonder how many nights this has been going on under different illusions.

I wonder if he's sad what he did. Like you...regretful, I mean, since he 'broke' her. I suppose he gets pleasure from fixing her.

(I half wish his illusion dropped, just because of that little trick of the light thing...I imagine a period of pure staring before things really got started. His ego might just shock him that he could be figured out...)

I find it telling that he would blush if it was him. ;-)

LOVE. IT!!

-BB

[razycrandomgirl]

I wonder about her trust issues. She's seems to be very trusting, but once crossed I think that's it for her. You get one chance.

I always think about that in the wedding scene. Tammy and I think she could have had history with either Gloria/Gilberto. Cause it seems like she's mean for no reason, but I think there must have been a reason ...

I wonder how many nights this has been going on under different illusions.

Uh you've hit the nail on the head! I have a feeling he's done it before and many time, under many guises. It must be maddening for Maya (to say the least).

I wonder if he's sad what he did. Like you...regretful, I mean, since he 'broke' her. I suppose he gets pleasure from fixing her.

He is a pervert. Not so much sexually in this story, but he is distorting everything and playing with her. He is a sick fellow (and I can't get enough of him!:X)
I think he does feel bad, but he makes himself feel better because he's "fixing" her.

*scoffs* Sylar.

THANK YOU! THANK YOU!

[bellonablack]

I also liked that she shocked him a little...

Nice. There's such layers to your characterizations.

(Wanted to add this!)

[razycrandomgirl]

He likes her because she can still do that to him.

You are so sweet! I too, like to dig into his brain. ;)

[albion1919]

lol I think bellonablack said it all :P

This was so gorgeous, I love that he can't leave her alone, that he has to resort to illusions.

I can smell the rum, the scent of her skin and hair, the inside of her mouth.

Loved this! Maybe he's thinking back to their last kiss.

Poor Maya, her actions all rang very true (more so then what we’ve seen on the show, that’s for sure.)

I can just imagine that one to many hair touches and she clocks it‘s him. Him wanting to fix her sounds quite ominous.

I want more!

[razycrandomgirl]

Thank you. ;)

Yes! He misses the kisses.

Thanks for saying. I figured she'd be hurt (especially because he wont leave her alone!)

that show, man ... Grrr. But thanks for the characters Kring! *waves*

I can just imagine that one to many hair touches and she clocks it‘s him.
He'd be shocked, but I think he'd like it. I think he likes that fire inside of her. He liked to live dangerously.

:D Thank you! I think there will be more! XD

[fifmeister]

Wow, this was so creepily brilliant! I love the scenario, and how he can't stay away from her, and how he feels little twinges at what he's done to her. And I could definitely see her becoming sort of jaded and weary like this because of all that's happened to her. Really great job on this! :D

[razycrandomgirl]

:D Thank you. I like how he changed her. it's kinda like self preservation, because if she were to keep going the way she did before (sweet, trusting, opened) she wouldn't last very long. Not long at all.

And maybe he sees that as "fixing her". Toughening her up so she can last a bit longer. But I'm not gonna tell you he's doing all of it for her good. Dude can't/wont leave her alone.

He'd be proud of whatever tiny influence he had over her. Like whenever she uses her powers he feels a little '\o/' because she can control it because of him.

*snicker* when she finds out ...

[dana_serenity]

OOh this is all kinds of awesomeness!! I love how you describe his feelings, and how he regrets making it that way!

It's her, I realize, and I put it there.
Best line ever! Great work chica ;) :)

[razycrandomgirl]

*face warms* Thank you! ;D

He may be great when it comes to fixing time pieces but, he wrecks everything else. :-\