For Your Eyes Only (fic)

[razycrandomgirl]

Author: Razycrandomgirl

Title: For Your Eyes Only

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: NC-17 smut and such

Characters/Pairings: Maya/Sylar/Elle (sorta)

Disclaimer: Don’t own them. Just like to play with them sometimes.

Spoilers/Time Line: AU

Summery: Watch and learn.

Author’s Notes: For

Comments

[adhara]

oh my god, elle/sylar/maya is my HUGE heroes kink (which i hardly ever see satisfied by the way) and this was absolutely amazing *___*

(just some corrections about the spanish though? "trust me" would be "confía en mí", "keep them closed, no matter what" -> "mantenlos cerrados, pase lo que pase" and "fuck me" -> "fóllame" :))

[razycrandomgirl]

Thank you! Thank you so much. I am fixing it right now. :D

[albion1919]

GUH well you know I thought it was hot as heck!

I love that it's ambiguous. Maya obvs wouldn’t sleep with Sylar in the context of the show but this:

It had been the first time Elle ever heard Maya refer to him bye his murderers name.

Never call me that.

Was awesome! I love that, it has so much meaning to it and hints at something deeper between them then the kinky pleasure of having sex with Elle watching.

[razycrandomgirl]

I loved it to. It's like he keeps her in a separate world apart from the one where he's know for the evil he's done.

Kinda like Rapunzel and the tower. Or the real sleeping beauty (which was messed up BTW)

[sarahetc]

Hot. OMG. Wow. Voyeurism! Hottt!!! And so in character!

[razycrandomgirl]

I actually want to cry a little, Sarah. You made my day. *wibbles*

Thank you so much. :x

[sarahetc]

Oh, you're welcome. I've been rereading. I like these parts:

Elle slid her body along the wall trying to get a better look. The air became thick with the sent of sex and ozone. Elle opened her mouth to taste the air, her breath becoming audible.

Sex and OZONE. Gawd science and superpowers are hot. She's all aroused so it smells like electricty. Gawd damn!

“Never call me that.” He said before reentering her, slowly deliberately. Her eyes rolled back into her head. He moved his hand to her shoulder squeezing it until she looked at him again. He looked at her as he pushed in again. They both groaned and he wouldn’t let her look away.

“Understand?”

And then I melted! And how to go turn down the air conditioner!

Elle, suddenly feeling like an intruder, uncurled her fingers from the edge of the table, standing up straight. Her breath was heavy and she brushed her hands down her clothes, smoothing out nonexistent wrinkles.

“Well, that was … Enlightening.” I can HEAR this part

[razycrandomgirl]

Sex and OZONE. Gawd science and superpowers are hot. She's all aroused so it smells like electricty. Gawd damn!

I love that smell. I love that everything is heavier and carries thicker in the air on the brink of a thunder/electrical storm. That is nature ... wet. :x

And then I melted!

\o/ I wrote good enough p0rn! :D

The fact that Miss Sarahetc thinks that this story is good has me all swelled up! :D My face hurts in a happy way.

About continuing it ... maybe fore your birthday? Or you could have y our wicked way with it. What ever floats your boat. I'm big on Saya. Elle has to grow on me. :)

but THANK YOU! *tackle hugs*

[fifmeister]

Normally I'm not into voyeurism, but that? Was hot. You write some excellent smut, I have to say!

He sniffed at her, baring his teeth as he leaned down over her whispering. “She’s mine.”

That part totally made me melt. And I loved the part when he talked to her in Spanish, that is just the most awesome thing ever. I think this actually might be one of my favorite fics of yours, which surprised me since I don't care that much for Elle. Nice job!

[razycrandomgirl]

O_o you surprise me. You should see the look on my face! I was shocked. I didn't think this would be your cup of tea at all (and I would have understood if you just skipped right over it). But I thank you so much for reading it and I'm glad you liked it.:D

You write some excellent smut, I have to say! Well, I'm learning from the master(or shall I say mistress?). lol you know who she is. ;D

I love it when he speaks Spanish to her. :x I love it a lot! It's like he took the time to learn her language so her could woo/comfort her with it. That's awesome and shows some kind of devotion.

I think this actually might be one of my favorite fics of yours...

=-O I am dumb struck. Really. :D

Thank you. Wow. :D *wibbles*

[fifmeister]

I won't lie, I was a little iffy when I saw "Maya/Sylar/Elle," but generally if it's Sylar/Maya I'll at least give it a look, unless it's non-con or torture or something like that.

That's awesome and shows some kind of devotion.

Exactly! There's a kind of intimacy to it. Particularly here, where Elle can't understand it.

Hehe, I would say you're a promising smut pupil! ;)

[razycrandomgirl]

I would say you're a promising smut pupil!
I'm gonna go and shout it from the roof tops!'

"I AM A PROMISING SMUT PUPIL!" \O/

[dana_serenity]

Dear God o_O how is that for morning literature. You expect me to still study after this?

OMG HONEY THANK YOU!!! ♥ ♥ ♥

I love everything about this, how you mention Adam, and how Sylar speaks Spanish with Maya, and the voyeurism and just... guh! Great work, seriously

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! \o/

[razycrandomgirl]

lol nice DW icon!

I thought you only had one more day! Why do you still get work on the last days? That's not kewl.

I'm glad you liked it! :D My day is complete!

Of course Elle's gonna go mess with Adam now. ;) Muahahhaa!

Hope your birthday rocks!

Re: HAPPY BIRTHDAY! \o/

[define_serenity]

Yeah, one more day with an exam. Over here the exams are the last days, after that school is ended for good. Typical that I have to have an exam so late :(

I'm glad your day is complete! I really did adore it ♥

Re: HAPPY BIRTHDAY! \o/

[razycrandomgirl]

really I'm just starting my day but I'm happy the fic made you happy. :D

I dropped Elle in there just for you. ;)

Have a good last day! Weeeeee!