For Your Eyes Only (fic)

Jun 25, 2008 16:34

Author: Razycrandomgirl

Title: For Your Eyes Only

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: NC-17 smut and such

Characters/Pairings: Maya/Sylar/Elle (sorta)

Disclaimer: Don’t own them. Just like to play with them sometimes.

Spoilers/Time Line: AU

Summery: Watch and learn.

Author’s Notes: For
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fic, un_love_you, smut, heroes, prompts, 100 maya stories!, friends, gift!fic, elle bishop, maya herrera, sylar, saya

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sarahetc June 25 2008, 23:18:51 UTC
Oh, you're welcome. I've been rereading. I like these parts:

Elle slid her body along the wall trying to get a better look. The air became thick with the sent of sex and ozone. Elle opened her mouth to taste the air, her breath becoming audible.

Sex and OZONE. Gawd science and superpowers are hot. She's all aroused so it smells like electricty. Gawd damn!

“Never call me that.” He said before reentering her, slowly deliberately. Her eyes rolled back into her head. He moved his hand to her shoulder squeezing it until she looked at him again. He looked at her as he pushed in again. They both groaned and he wouldn’t let her look away.

“Understand?”

And then I melted! And how to go turn down the air conditioner!

Elle, suddenly feeling like an intruder, uncurled her fingers from the edge of the table, standing up straight. Her breath was heavy and she brushed her hands down her clothes, smoothing out nonexistent wrinkles.

“Well, that was … Enlightening.”

I can HEAR this part.

I want to know what happens next. Does it prey on Sylar's mind? I kind of want it to. I want him to get obsessed with what it would be like be with Elle and start stalking her. Maybe there's mutual stalking. They fuck and use teeth, I don't know. Woo!

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razycrandomgirl June 28 2008, 04:04:29 UTC
Sex and OZONE. Gawd science and superpowers are hot. She's all aroused so it smells like electricty. Gawd damn!

I love that smell. I love that everything is heavier and carries thicker in the air on the brink of a thunder/electrical storm. That is nature ... wet. :x

And then I melted!

\o/ I wrote good enough p0rn! :D

The fact that Miss Sarahetc thinks that this story is good has me all swelled up! :D My face hurts in a happy way.

About continuing it ... maybe fore your birthday? Or you could have y our wicked way with it. What ever floats your boat. I'm big on Saya. Elle has to grow on me. :)

but THANK YOU! *tackle hugs*

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sarahetc June 28 2008, 14:08:10 UTC
Woohoo! My birthday is far enough away that if the spirit moves you, go for it! I don't want to infringe on your OTP.

I think that Sylar and Elle have a lot in common: overbearing parents, careers they might not have personally chosen, a skewed sense of "special," profound narcissism. Which makes me wonder what it would be like if they screwed, you know?

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razycrandomgirl June 28 2008, 19:57:51 UTC
lol well when you put is like that ... *wiggles eyebrows*

I wouldn't mind seeing them partnered up (as in working together because they aren't gonna give us that one the show are they?:-\)

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