Fic: The Man In The Moon ("Mare Serenitatis" - Part IV)

[greenowl]

Comments

[turtle_goose]

I don't think I can explain how much I love this series. I love how you're capturing everyone's characters. I love young Jayne and young Zoe in particular. Everything seems so true to the 'Verse, but has a great Grease 1 & 2 sort of vibe to it that I really just love.

I'm so glad to read another installment of this. I can't wait to see how things continue to shape up!

[greenowl]

Thank you so much! Young Zoe is a treat to work with and as for Jayne, well, let's just say he writes himself. ;)

More to come soon!

Awesome AU

[alsunwunderland]

I have the feeling that jealousy is about to rear its' ugly green-eyed head!

Re: Awesome AU

[greenowl]

You know it. ;)

[pladbelle_87]

GAH!! I've just read the entire story... I cannot wait for more. I am LOVING this!!! =D

[greenowl]

Hee! Thank you. :D

I've noticed that you've been posting to CFAK, too - I must read!

[an_ardent_rain]

Ooh, yay, another bit of chapter! How lovely! This story is fresh and fun, and I must say I enjoy reading it. My favorite part of this chapter was River's thought that Jayne wanted only to vex her. Hmm, I'm sure he does want to vex her... But perhaps not in the way she thinks!

Really fluid writing; I think the style complements the actual story very well. Gosh, you've already got me looking forward to the next part! Great job.

[greenowl]

Thank you very, very much! *beams*

Oh, yes, Jayne definitely wants to vex her...she's the first girl in years who hasn't fainted at his feet. ;P

[kingzgurl]

Update soon girl! You're spoiling us with two updates in the last week, and I'm hoping you're not done with the regular updating yet ;)

Love the new chapter and the Jayne/River interaction! River trying to understand what words mean is just perfect, and Jayne tricking Kaylee and everyone into letting him pick River up was awesome.

[greenowl]

I'm working on the next part as we speak. ;)

Love me some sneaky Jayne - he thinks he's so smooth. ;P