Leave a comment

Comments 28

gilove2dance November 20 2008, 14:39:23 UTC
You updated so quickly! My hero! And so well written too! SQUEE! Jayne is definately a heart-throb...I bought the movie, 3:15 the other day...he's 23 when it was filmed! It hasn't come in the mail yet but I keep watching the trailer for it and D.C. Cab...*heart explodes*

Reply

greenowl November 24 2008, 20:18:30 UTC
Hi, honey! So glad I could make you squee!

Make sure you keep your resuscitation equipment handy - he's known to cause severe disruption in your pulmonary functioning. ;)

Reply


helgatwb November 21 2008, 01:43:21 UTC
This is very well written, and so true to character, even if it is an AU. I am dying, DYING, do you hear, to read the next part. Love it.

Reply

greenowl November 24 2008, 20:18:53 UTC
Thank you! Next part is in the works. :D

Reply


depthxofxdreams November 21 2008, 04:36:38 UTC
yay another update!!!

!!!!!SQUEE DANCE!!!!!

love it so far..cannot wait to see what happens next!!

Reply

greenowl November 24 2008, 20:20:28 UTC
Many thanks!

A few words to whet the appetite: sock hop, slumber party, footsie.

;D

Reply


jcap1526 November 21 2008, 07:46:16 UTC
I like the name Mansfield for a middle name! I can't be the only one who caught that one...hehe. Can't wait for the next exciting chapter!!!!

Reply

greenowl November 24 2008, 20:30:11 UTC
Heh-heh. I had no idea that was his middle name until Ma Cobb shouted it in my ear (the writing experience is usually me transcribing the movie playing in my head) and it seemed like an appropriate name, given the time frame.

Next chapter in the works. :D

Reply


gemmage November 23 2008, 05:10:12 UTC
Oh, I am so happy that you are posting on this fic again!! There are maybe 10 fics that I would PAY to read to completion, and this is one of them ( ... )

Reply

greenowl November 24 2008, 20:40:43 UTC
Hi, sweetie! So glad you stopped by and gave it another read. The entire outline of the story is written in an orange Staples notebook that I carry with me everywhere. If you're really rabid, I'll scan the pages and post them (you can read the various scenarios I went through before arriving at the one that became this tale).

Jayne was adorable during "The Message" when he read his mother's letter, and I thought, if anyone can make him behave, it's Ma Cobb.

I love P&P - one of the greatest love stories ever written and from the the female's point of view - yay! :)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up