Catching Up With The Heart

Jun 21, 2007 00:17

Title: Catching Up With The Heart
Author: raychcons
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Movie spoilers - maybe? :P
Warnings: Ed/Roy
Summary: It would take a while, but one day his body would catch up with his heart
Notes: Tried to make this long - it didn't really work. Don't get any ideas that this is a happy piece - it's not, I can't do them. It's depressing..ish :D

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ed/roy, edward elric, roy mustang, fiction, drabble

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sapphyre_kikyo June 20 2007, 23:55:23 UTC
*sob* So touching! Thank-you!

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raychcons June 20 2007, 23:56:49 UTC
Glad you liked it :]

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sadler_girl June 21 2007, 00:43:11 UTC
That was diffrent, but sweet in it's own way. That Ed was so tempted but didn't and didn't kill himself to follow Roy.
Thanks for the insight.

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raychcons June 21 2007, 17:00:00 UTC
Thank you - comments like that make me wanna write. Glad you liked it!

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binaryalchemist June 21 2007, 01:07:17 UTC
One Word: Magnificent!
::bows in honor of your talent, 'cause you made me get teary::

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raychcons June 21 2007, 17:00:26 UTC
Haha XD Glad you liked it. I'm kinda feeling back 'cos I made you cry, though :D

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shalinilahiri June 21 2007, 01:21:14 UTC

Wow, very lovely little piece. I loved the last line, and the way you conveyed the sadness.

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raychcons June 21 2007, 17:02:05 UTC
Thanks, Shal-chan - I still don't think it's as wonderful as that piece you wrote for me. Bah! :D I will get to your level one day!

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shalinilahiri June 21 2007, 22:42:36 UTC

*blush* I'm not that good you know....

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raychcons June 22 2007, 10:12:39 UTC
Yeah you are! :D

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noob_alchemist June 21 2007, 01:33:55 UTC
Wow, I've never read anything like this before! It was so bittersweet & the ending made me smile & almost cry, it's so touching and beautiful, the whole fic is touching! ♥

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raychcons June 22 2007, 10:13:07 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it - I was trying to get all these things across, and I am glad people got that!

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