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SM Monthly Fanfic Challenge Theme #86 (27MAR06) (con't)

Mar 29, 2006 13:00

Title: Seeking Serenity ~ Atlantis: Destruction
Author: Raya
Theme: Villains (Optional: Time Period)
Genre: Drama
Version: Manga (sort of)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1648

Disclaimer: All of the characters used below were created by Takeuchi Naoko. I have merely converted them into paper dolls to play with for a little while.

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mar'06, seeking serenity, atlantis, mars, mercury, jupiter, neptune, venus, uranus

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sheankelor March 30 2006, 23:53:43 UTC

I liked the end ( temp going down - love meds!!!!!)

raya_light March 31 2006, 00:38:49 UTC

Yeah!! Lucky you. That last fever I had, aspirin didn't seem to do a thing to it. ^-^

sheankelor April 1 2006, 01:19:15 UTC

Rambling - asprin - advil- tylonal in a cycle every 4 hours for 2 days then I was able to come in an write your comments. Until then I read and didn't even think about typing unless it required no creativity.

raya_light April 1 2006, 01:41:44 UTC

That was me... Except I didn't bother to pop the fever reducers after I noticed they weren't doing anything anyway. The only time I took them after that was when I was getting into the mid 100's. *small frown* And that was two of the days I really wanted to use to catch up in here! Ah well. I managed it somehow...

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aserene August 13 2006, 18:46:21 UTC

WOW...i reall really like the end. I think it's ironic that they fought so hard and succeed only to die, but ireally like the end!!

raya_light August 13 2006, 19:15:27 UTC

Thank you. I have a whole series of these planned. I thought of one set in ancient Egypt some time ago which was much longer, but I haven't written it yet. Maybe next year, hahaha...

aserene August 13 2006, 19:35:32 UTC

ooo Egypt sounds really really cool!

raya_light August 13 2006, 19:44:56 UTC

Mm-hmm! Rei is the daughter of a priest, Ami's parents run a bath house, Minako is the spoiled daughter of a minor noble and his favorite concubine, and Makoto... Huh. Who was Makoto again? Ah yes, the daughter of a high ranking general/Master of the Guard. They meet at Ami's bath house (she wants to go study and make more of herself, but her parents are reluctant), and become friends. Minako has half remembered dreams of another place, and they are all plauged with the need to find and protect someone. They find a young girl in need of their protection, but...

^-^ I'm mean, hahaha... No Outers, though. Most of the Seeking Serenity series will focus on the four Inners only.

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