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Oct 18, 2008 23:32

The last one I have any inspiration for is done. The ghost picture tried but it wouldn't coalesce. I hope this one is good. I like it, but it is scifi and I love scifi so I might be biased ( Read more... )

sep'08, troubleshooter, image only

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lexie_b October 19 2008, 07:54:20 UTC
I really like this - you're a natural born storyteller. It doesn't matter what you're writing, I'm always sucked in from the first sentence.

I'd like to read more from this 'verse. I'm intrigued. Will Setsuna ever have to blow her cover? Is she the other original senshi still living?

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sheankelor October 19 2008, 16:46:53 UTC
*wide eyed* Me? Raya is the natural born story teller. She has been telling story for as long as I can remember... Um-m-m Thanks for the compliment. *Slow amazed smile leaks out* Thanks alot.

More from this 'verse... I would like her to tell me more from this 'verse too. It would be really fun to write. She is the original still living. She is the one that befriended ChibiUsa. Yes, this is Puu. Her cover... that would be interesting. What could make her blow her cover? Now I will have to think about it. ^-^

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raya_light October 20 2008, 17:38:38 UTC
Very pretty, darlin'. *notes the time and grimaces* Gotta hurry, though. It flows very smoothly and has enough ties and references to SM to keep it believable/in world. You do have a few small typos, though. that that board had had a problem... (though it will look awfully funny with the required double doubles) With her help, the scientists had pushed... Mercury has lots of patients, I'm sure, but I think Setsuna has more patience... *grins mischeviously ( ... )

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Supposed to be working raya_light October 20 2008, 21:35:09 UTC
*pitiful look*

Hoshino Miiruko (named after the Mir space station. Stars' Peace/Miracle)
medium red hair (auburn? might be too light)

parents killed in an accident when she was 12 or so. First loss of Cosmos' Great War, but no-one knew it.

*blink* Sudden thought... Sun is yellow, Usagi's hair is yellow. Sun becomes red giant, Cosmos' hair is red? Interesting... But fades to white with power a la Misty, naturally.

Has a bird for a familiar? A pheonix maybe? Though many would argue that should go to Mars with the fire and all... To be cosmic, I guess it'd have to be a dragon or something, huh. Or an energy being or a black amorphous mass. *laughs* Anyway, it could be her familiar that accidentally tore up the wires...

Comes to Puu's attention somehow

*Notes that this is before Serenity the Destroyer (VIII), so it could technically be worked into the Crystokyo-verse ( ... )

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seniumboy October 21 2008, 04:21:02 UTC
I have to agree with lexie, you are a natural born story teller. And this is one of the best examples of scifi that I have seen from you. Very nice the way you get Setsuna into this new setting.

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sheankelor October 22 2008, 00:03:18 UTC
Thank you. Coming from you that means a bit more as I know you have read most of my stuff. My real qualm is that how can I be a story teller if I always play in someone else's universe? Doesn't that mean I don't have the creativity to make my own...

And you approve of my scifi tale also, then I think it is good and I wasn't being too biased. Now if only a few more ideas leak my way I can write more about her...*patently ignoring Raya*

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