The last one I have any inspiration for is done. The ghost picture tried but it wouldn't coalesce. I hope this one is good. I like it, but it is scifi and I love scifi so I might be biased
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Very pretty, darlin'. *notes the time and grimaces* Gotta hurry, though. It flows very smoothly and has enough ties and references to SM to keep it believable/in world. You do have a few small typos, though. that that board had had a problem... (though it will look awfully funny with the required double doubles) With her help, the scientists had pushed... Mercury has lots of patients, I'm sure, but I think Setsuna has more patience... *grins mischeviously*
To spin out and make her have to reveal her identity... That would take a major threat, ne? Maybe the wire wasn't really broken by the bird. Or the bird was controlled. It was just the first small test. Though why the enemy would want to kill all the people instead of just conquering them and using them to attack Neptune then Uranus (or Uranus then Neptune depending on the year and which one is closer) or as a support base for a direct drive on Mars or Earth I don't know. Hmmm... Maybe trying to sucker the senshi out to the edges of the system? Oh so many possibilities to play with. ^-^ I think it would be fun to make her have to reveal herself as the planetary guardian rather than as the guardian of time. Hahaha, oh the fun she could have with that... A poor, weak little senshi way out on the edge of the system, you couldn't possibly depend on her to defend more than the three cities on Pluto. Someone else saying that, of course, while Setsuna silently laughs at them. Of course, you could always have her find Cosmos... Or a new legendary Moon who is not in the royal city. A kidnapped heir? Or daughter/granddaughter/great-granddaughter of a long lost and assumed dead kidnapped member of the family? *curses at the wonderful thoughts now rolling through her head* I still need to finish Macross and the others I promised you! Drats! *tries to cage the ghostly plot bunnies for later use as the alarm bell to get back to work continues to ring and ring and ring*
Supposed to be workingraya_lightOctober 20 2008, 21:35:09 UTC
*pitiful look*
Hoshino Miiruko (named after the Mir space station. Stars' Peace/Miracle) medium red hair (auburn? might be too light)
parents killed in an accident when she was 12 or so. First loss of Cosmos' Great War, but no-one knew it.
*blink* Sudden thought... Sun is yellow, Usagi's hair is yellow. Sun becomes red giant, Cosmos' hair is red? Interesting... But fades to white with power a la Misty, naturally.
Has a bird for a familiar? A pheonix maybe? Though many would argue that should go to Mars with the fire and all... To be cosmic, I guess it'd have to be a dragon or something, huh. Or an energy being or a black amorphous mass. *laughs* Anyway, it could be her familiar that accidentally tore up the wires...
Comes to Puu's attention somehow
*Notes that this is before Serenity the Destroyer (VIII), so it could technically be worked into the Crystokyo-verse.* ;)
Moon/ChibiUsa is cousin and heir. Link is pure maternal back to ChibiUsa's younger granddaughter who was presumed killed in an accident as a child. A space accident so no blame and no body with an amnesiac child in a remote area that someone doesn't want to give up or thinks they're protecting? After the amazing resemblence between Mir and the current princess, testing would confirm the blood relation and links would be put together.
And thus ends all thoughts of work. *sighs as some of the bunnies settle down and relieve pressure on the cage*
Re: Supposed to be workingsheankelorOctober 20 2008, 22:55:32 UTC
Have lots of fun running with it sweety. That is too big for me. I'll tinker here in my small sections and you can suck it into yours if you like. I mean Destroyer is 3 Serenitys down the line. ^-^
Re: Supposed to be workingraya_lightOctober 21 2008, 02:18:07 UTC
Awww, you could play with some of it! Mir or whatever you want to call her... Cosmos or Moon being reborn on Pluto... You know you want too.... *smile*
Re: Supposed to be workingsheankelorOctober 22 2008, 00:00:05 UTC
Is that how Serenity the VIII becomes the destroyer? Is it a fight for the throne?
As to want to... my true desire right now is to figure out how I can stay home and get well with out feeling guilty. It's just that I feel total worn out, but my temp says I'm not feverish, the opposite actually. So, I can' t justify it to myself. I am already ready to go to bed and it is only 8:00.
I'll keep the bunny in mind for later. Maybe one of those if Onlys I have left will fit...
Re: Supposed to be workingraya_lightOctober 22 2008, 12:51:28 UTC
Nah, she's the Destroyer because she accidentally destroyed the system when she finally eliminated her demon horde. Poor woman. She didn't mean to! *smile*
Feeling totally worn out is a sign that you need to stay home, fever or no fever. If you push too hard when you're run down, you'll just get sick again. You know that, Mama! If you have enough sick time left, do it. Ignore the house, sleep, watch tv, read... anything to relax and recharge. Preferrably do this on a Friday or a Monday if you can last that long and do it without seeming to be taking advantage. *hugs* Get well soon, dearling...
Re: Supposed to be workingsheankelorOctober 22 2008, 21:18:16 UTC
*returns hug* The problem is is that I have been out to take care of J&D last Monday and then took a half day yesterday for G. And others at work are pushing through the ickes...
To spin out and make her have to reveal her identity... That would take a major threat, ne? Maybe the wire wasn't really broken by the bird. Or the bird was controlled. It was just the first small test. Though why the enemy would want to kill all the people instead of just conquering them and using them to attack Neptune then Uranus (or Uranus then Neptune depending on the year and which one is closer) or as a support base for a direct drive on Mars or Earth I don't know. Hmmm... Maybe trying to sucker the senshi out to the edges of the system? Oh so many possibilities to play with. ^-^ I think it would be fun to make her have to reveal herself as the planetary guardian rather than as the guardian of time. Hahaha, oh the fun she could have with that... A poor, weak little senshi way out on the edge of the system, you couldn't possibly depend on her to defend more than the three cities on Pluto. Someone else saying that, of course, while Setsuna silently laughs at them. Of course, you could always have her find Cosmos... Or a new legendary Moon who is not in the royal city. A kidnapped heir? Or daughter/granddaughter/great-granddaughter of a long lost and assumed dead kidnapped member of the family? *curses at the wonderful thoughts now rolling through her head* I still need to finish Macross and the others I promised you! Drats! *tries to cage the ghostly plot bunnies for later use as the alarm bell to get back to work continues to ring and ring and ring*
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Hoshino Miiruko (named after the Mir space station. Stars' Peace/Miracle)
medium red hair (auburn? might be too light)
parents killed in an accident when she was 12 or so. First loss of Cosmos' Great War, but no-one knew it.
*blink* Sudden thought... Sun is yellow, Usagi's hair is yellow. Sun becomes red giant, Cosmos' hair is red? Interesting... But fades to white with power a la Misty, naturally.
Has a bird for a familiar? A pheonix maybe? Though many would argue that should go to Mars with the fire and all... To be cosmic, I guess it'd have to be a dragon or something, huh. Or an energy being or a black amorphous mass. *laughs* Anyway, it could be her familiar that accidentally tore up the wires...
Comes to Puu's attention somehow
*Notes that this is before Serenity the Destroyer (VIII), so it could technically be worked into the Crystokyo-verse.* ;)
Moon/ChibiUsa is cousin and heir. Link is pure maternal back to ChibiUsa's younger granddaughter who was presumed killed in an accident as a child. A space accident so no blame and no body with an amnesiac child in a remote area that someone doesn't want to give up or thinks they're protecting? After the amazing resemblence between Mir and the current princess, testing would confirm the blood relation and links would be put together.
And thus ends all thoughts of work. *sighs as some of the bunnies settle down and relieve pressure on the cage*
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As to want to... my true desire right now is to figure out how I can stay home and get well with out feeling guilty. It's just that I feel total worn out, but my temp says I'm not feverish, the opposite actually. So, I can'
t justify it to myself. I am already ready to go to bed and it is only 8:00.
I'll keep the bunny in mind for later. Maybe one of those if Onlys I have left will fit...
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Feeling totally worn out is a sign that you need to stay home, fever or no fever. If you push too hard when you're run down, you'll just get sick again. You know that, Mama! If you have enough sick time left, do it. Ignore the house, sleep, watch tv, read... anything to relax and recharge. Preferrably do this on a Friday or a Monday if you can last that long and do it without seeming to be taking advantage. *hugs* Get well soon, dearling...
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Thanks for the help. And I'm glad you thought it was pretty. I did too, and that is one of the reasons I worried about it.
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*irritated frown* I don't care what Firefox or Merriam-Webster.com says, equivilate is a word even if it isn't spelled right. :PPP on them.
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