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[sheankelor]

Title: Doppelganger
Author: Ree
Theme: If Only Mamoru's parents had lived
Genre: general
Version: AU - Dream Castle story line
Rating: G

My imagination is playing with dolls again, but they have created their own script. The originals belong to Takeuchi Naoko .

Comments

[raya_light]

Oooo... I would say the plot thickens, but we knew something like this was coming. *smile*

hair was too light...

had dinner... (kinda hard to eat a diner, dear, though I suppose you could have one if you wanted)

As Steven served himself comma...

...as he attempted to sleep comma?...

He would meet her.

Explain the difference between a doppleganger and a fetch? My mind is drawing a blank for some reason.

[sheankelor]

There is none really. But since you drew a blank, I put an AN in so that everyone else would know, too. I feel like I have littered the top area with little notes. *shakes head* But I really think the warning about reading in order is necessary, if not some would be left out in left field. Especially as I stopped telling who Maritza is.

And you got to this one before I could. ^-^

[seniumboy]

Very interesting concept. Up until now he's been in love with Serena and now suddenly he's realizing he mistook that person for someone else? I guess the age gap wasn't hint enough *snickers*

I really like how you handled his parents in this story. It worked out very well but I don't think everyone knows what a fetch is. I've heard about it before this story but I can't recall what is. I think the meaning I heard for it was different then the meaning you gave.

And her hair was slightly different? I was under the impression it was very different. *is confused*

[sheankelor]

Her hair was down and a pale color.... that is all I can say. And my AN wasn't enough of a definition... gah! I will have to see if I can come up with another one then.

[sheankelor]

Oh, and I'm glad you found it interesting. ^-^