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[sheankelor]

Okay... how many other themes is this story/Universe (I need a name for it. Help!) going to try and take over. I haven't even finished the last one. There is at least one more chapter in that set. And now it has claimed the ChibiUsa recognizing her parents, another sibling, and another one is ill... Jeez! Thanks Raya!*Fake sarcasm

Comments

[raya_light]

Beautiful descriptives, dearling. Simply beautiful. I think I've found a nom for Best Description.

And I love the take on how they "become" senshi. *nods* Very believable and potentially canonical. I think this is my favorite so far.

[sheankelor]

It is mine, too. See, she is happy! And I even got a reason for her to be Moon latter. ^-^

And as I haven't read this month, I will say thank you for the great description and hold out on the nom idea.(but is very happy you think it has potential)

[sheankelor]

Oh! And Sailor Earth.... Sisters..... Hint Hint Hint

[seniumboy]

Hmmm, I think the descriptions could use a bit more work. Earth and Moon come off as people, but they are suppose to be spirits right? Spirits no one can see I take it too. Aside from that, and mentioning what other senshi are already present at this ceremony and if they are participating in it, the story was very good. The climax, where Usagi transforms, was very beautiful and original. It was a great idea to use a Tiger's Eye gem. I expected something gold in nature, thinking about the Golden Crystal and all, but I like what you've done here a lot more. Just wondering why her henshi stick looks so different then the other henshi sticks though (no earth astrological symbol)

[sheankelor]

Well... I couldn't remember the symbol for Earth? And there was no gem that would work as well either.

The senshi spirits were to be seen as people, they are just in a different plane of existence. And I'll try to show that the senshi are just staring at her from the sidelines. *sigh with a smile* you make me work more. ^-^