Just a Short Little Thing

[ravens_rising]

Title: Mistake
Rating: PG / K
Warnings: none
Word Count: 315
Characters: Unohana
Pairing: None
Beta: nannete <3333
Author's Note: I kind of like the idea behind this. Has anyone ever seen this done before? *curious*

Comments

[orange_fuu]

YAY! I like the introspection, and Unohana is a very under-written character. Good job :D

[ravens_rising]

<3 Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yes, she is =/. I really like her, so it makes me sad. Thanks!

[nendo_chan]

Unohana~ ♥ Very good introspection into an ignored character.

[ravens_rising]

Unohana is love. <3 Thanks!

[pony_rocks]

Great to read about Unohana! I think she really must have felt like this.

[ravens_rising]

Thanks! I'm glad you think it's plausible! :)

[nannete]

Unohana's facade is so unruffled and serene that I'm fairly sure whatever goes on inside rages and gnaws at her, just like you have here. I can't imagine what that would be like for two thousand years (just as well I don't have to!). Great job once again ♥

See those comments? Everyone thinks your introspection is well-written :)

...and I'll save you my rants on Hinamori:p

[ravens_rising]

<333 YES. *beams* Yay, I'm glad that came through! ^_^;;

I can't imagine what that would be like for two thousand years
The two thousand years thing is a lot of the reason I like writing Unohana, Ukitake, and Shunsui. ^_^;; I try to fiddle around with it in my fic... so many writers of them don't think about that aspect of them. Ehh. I'll stop rambling now. >D

*blushes* I was surprised at how many comments this really small introspection on a very small character got. xDD <3

[zoelyn]

I agree with everyone, you did a nice job again. <3 I can totally imagine she felt this way.

[ravens_rising]

*blushes* Thanks!