Romancing the Pain - Part 22

[raven_bard]

Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: M (swearing and violence)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: I’m so sorry this is late. Honestly, my muse has taken an extended vacation and I was so darn

Comments

[girlechick]

Not another cliffhanger!! You're killing me with those things. I don't think I can take anymore! Oh, and great chapter by the way.

[extessie]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

I'm literally sitting at the tip of my chair, I can't staaaand this! I really really really really really really really REALLY hope its Pepa, with like...a metal piece of something to hold her up and is coming their way.

I really hope your muse is going to un-bitch herself and wait for you to catch up. Pfftt. Who does she thinkh she is, walking away to god knows where to leave you? When you find her, you should give her some spanking. Mayube she'll learn ^_^

Awesome chapter, with every one I get more anxious =]

[raven_bard]

Spanking my muse? I don't think she'd appreciate it. Or maybe she would like it and then it wouldn't be much of a punishment. *chuckles*

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Nice theory you got goin...Pepa and metal. Buuuut...nah, you'll find out in the next chapter. *grins*

[raven_bard]

*chuckles* Trust me the cliffhanger isn't intentional. I just can't squeeze in everything in one chapter. Patience, it'll all be over soon.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

Hi!

[junebuggy01]

Wait, there's a cliffhanger? Hmm... curious. :P No, but I liked this chapter. It was great, though, the image of Pepa's ribs rubbing against her lungs stuck with me throughout my entire reading of this chap and well, suffice to say... it's still stuck in my head and now I hate you. But good chapter and I'm starting to think that you may be cliffhanger god. Seriously? You're cliffies are brutal!

Um, sorry bout the muse sitch, just to let you know, I wouldn't let yours run away if I caught her *Wags finger* LOL. Love you and your awesomeness hunny bunny.

Re: Hi!

[raven_bard]

Hi! back. *grins* What you don't like ribs? With bbq sauce? They're nice! *snickers*

Cliffhanger god huh? I learned from the best. *sticks out tongue* The student has excelled the teacher. Whoo!! But c'mon...the cliffy wasn't that bad. Right? No? *shrugs* It was necessary.

Yeah my muse...it's touch and go sometimes. Well, cool. You wouldn't let her run away but the question is, would you give her back to me or keep her just to torture me a bit? *laughs* Thanks for dropping a note, darlin.

Re: Hi!

[junebuggy01]

*Rolls eyes* I hate ribs or really anything meat. *Shudders* What can I say? I'm a vegetarian for beliefs.

And yes *Nods* I believe you are cliffhanger god and have excelled in more than that area hunny. But I do understand the necessity of cliffhangers. And I like them. :D

As for your muse... *Thinks* Um... I'm not into the whole torture thing... Though you've been really dreadful to me lately, pushing my buttons and everything. *Pulls out handcuffs* Why would I hold your muse hostage to torture you, when I can just hold you? *Smiles*

Re: Hi!

[raven_bard]

I forgot you were a veggie. Darn...you and I could never eat out. We'd murder each other over where to eat. And I'm so not a fan of greens. *pulls face*

Handcuffs huh? Niiiice. *begins backing away slowly* And I haven't been dreadful, just...playful. *snickers* Hey look it's Superman! *points behind you and bolts*

[lenageek]

You just did this to get back at me, didn't ya? ;ppppppppppp There, there's a raspberry for ya!

But I'm still loving it - I was totally on pins and needles waiting for Pepa to run into Silvia in the hall, but something tells me that's not gonna happen - not after all this angst!

And tell your muse I'm gonna bitch slap her if she doesn't get permanently straitened out! Then again, you can pummel mine in all kinds of ways with that fantastically angsty imagination of yours since my muse tends to be a real pain in the ass too! ;D Don't ya love/hate writing sometimes? Hee hee!

[raven_bard]

"You just did this to get back at me, didn't ya?" ~ Whaaa? No, now why would I do that? *snickers* Actually truth be told, it was the only way to end the chapter. Can't put all the action into one chapter..it'll be too long so cliffies are the only way to end.

Writing is a labor of love....and it's a curse when your muse ditches you. But hey, that's life. How goes it with your muse? She didn't run off too, did she? What is up with everybody's muses this past week? It's like they're running of and planning something. *frowns* Sounds like mutiny to me!

Thanks for reading and commenting btw. As for whether or not Pepa's gonna appear...weeeell you'll just have to wait and see. *chuckles*

[mmm_kekse]

eww ribs piercing lungs is totally gross! I so don't want to picture that or even think about what it would feel like. eww lol and I hate you for those cliffhangers! I swear you're worse than Juney! xD I can't stand it I want more I need more! *keeps rocking back and forth* again an amazing chapter and I loved it and yes I know you cant puteverything in one chapter but damn!!! It's killing me! LOL Silvia needs to find Pepa soon. that girl is like a walking encyclopedia of life threatening injuries!
oh but scikening cracks in combination with mafia heads hitting walls are awesome!! <3 xD

[raven_bard]

Rib piercing! The new fashion! *laughs hysterically* Ok so I might be losing it...assignments and all. My brain's starting to let go of the last few shreds of sanity I have left.

Aww what's wrong with cliffhangers? They can be fun! When you're the author issuing them. *snickers* And "walking encyclopedia of life threatening injuries?" That is such a cool phrase! *hands you a brownie* Here, would that keep til the next chapter? *hands you a candy bar as well* There, that should do it. Would it help you to know that my muse gave me the first paragraph to the next chapter?

Thanks for reading and leaving a commenting!

[mmm_kekse]

hey sexy rib piercing you have there! I like. totally brings out your mortal lung wound :D and sanity is boring so just let it go already xD

LOL! cliffhangers are never fun! you just like torture too much! *grabs the brownie and the candy and hoards it for the long loooong wait for the next chapter that will end with an even meaner cliffy*
and thank you! I am quite proud of that phrase myself *giggles*
and tell your muse I love her for that but just don't let her runaway again! she has greedy impatient addicts to feed! xD

[raven_bard]

Ah you won't have to wait too long. My muse is being nice. I'm almost done with the next chapter. Soo tomorrow you should probably see an update. *winks* And cliffhanger on the next chapter? You want one? Sure! *runs off to work on it*

[sportysmurf]

Update, Yay! Punctured lungs, Boo. Silvia and gang to the rescue, Yay! Cliffie with some weird metal thing flying around, Boo. Overall cliffie - EEK!
*hides*

[raven_bard]

*laughs* You're comments are awesome, Sport. Straight to the point. But aww c'mon don't hide! Cliffies are the only way to end these chapters. I've no choice! *waves a brownie enticingly in front of you* C'mon...come out and eat this yummy double chocolate brownie I got from the grocer's yesterday.

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment btw. :-)

[sportysmurf]

*edges out, sniffs and grabs the brownie. mmm...brownie...*

Sorry about the directness - I'm just kinda built that way. ;)

btw I haven't friended you! Can I?

[raven_bard]

You haven't? Really? I thought you did. By all means. *bounces happily* Yay another friend! *hands you another brownie*